I love love love this story. I literally sat down and read all 27 chapters in one sitting. (I need a life). But seriously, great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Lizz<3
I'm literally so in love with this story. I started reading it just...one day ago, maybe two, and got to the most recent chapter. I didn't even want to go out or go to sleep because I just loved it so much!
You have a really beautiful and unique way of writing. I like how you're able to transition from Natalie's thoughts to Oli's smoothly. I'm yet to master that, haha! You have flawless grammar, as well, which makes reading this so much easier and a lot more fun in a way, too. Not to mention this has made me cry one or two times because I've gotten to emotionally attached to Natalie that whenever she's hurt, I'm hurt!
Anyway, I've subscribed to this and truly hope there's another update soon! This is, by far, the best story I've read!
I'm so happy to read a new chapter. I really missed your writing. Actually I miss it everytime. I read a fair amount of stories on mibba, and practically all of them are written by americans. And when I read your story, I realise how differently british and americans write. Or maybe it's me idk. I feel like this story is taking a new turn, because Oli is finally over Amanda. I really don't know what will happen between Oli and Nat though. Even if Amanda is out of the picture, problems don't magically disappear. Anyway, I hope everything goes well in your life (being almost a grown-up sucks, I feel you) and wish you good luck for anything you want to accomplish \o/ (Sorry for any mistake but I'm trying my best haha)
Here because of comment swap! Since your story is quite long, I decided only to read the first chapter. First of all, I like your layout. It's simple and pretty and it doesn't distract the reader from the story, which is definitely a big yes point for me. I loved Natalie and her relationship with her family. I definitely think her character is interesting enough for me to read the rest of this story later. Update soon I guess!
I'm so glad I came across this story! This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read - definitely the best BMTH one - and it's made me very happy to have spent the last few hours reading your work. Please update soon!