Officially not happy with this. I'm pretty sure I have a feeling where this is about to go and I'm not liking it! this is going to end up with them not being together at the end and I did not read all of this for that to happeeenn :c or she's going to end up pregnant. and him dead. and ohmygod
i love this whole story but I really didn't like that the main character just accepted the breakup, like what? I think she should have had a bigger reaction to seeing him again and accepting the dance, because accepting the dance was practically like accepting the relationship to be back again. I don't know, just seemed off to me. Well I'll continue to stick around anywho :)
Okay, I won't lie I have been reading these chapters with watery eyes. You have such a way powerful of transmitting the emotion through your story, I can feel everything Cori is feeling. I love this story so much, and I do hope it ends happily I couldn't bear it if it didn't.
You are an amazing author, and thank you for creating such a wonderful story for us to read. I fell in love with it in the first chapter so now I'm madly in love. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
I would seriously hate you if that was the ending. (JK, but I would be really mad)
But I agree with Erin.Grace, Tate had some good points. I still can't believe that Cori did that and Tate has every right to be mad and ticked. I wasn't that surprised that Tate and Eric got in a fight and I'm kind-of glad that Tate "won" it.
Tate has such a good point, he had to earn her love and trust and all of that before she let anything physical happen between them and all of sudden she just fucks Eric!?! What the hell :c and i knew this would happen! I'm actually crying a little bit! If this were the end I would have hated you!!! Can't wait to see whats next
I really don't understand how this happened. Like...at all. How did she go from trying to regain his trust to completely freakin shattering it? The fuck, Cori? Seriously? It's not that hard to say no or to, I don't know, not have sex with someone you don't even like and aren't even attracted to. But seriously, it took all f that for her to finally break up with him? Oh my god...no just no.
OHMYGOD how could you make that happen!?! ohmygod! It's going to be the end of them and I just know that Eric is going to be the one who outs the secret and she wont be able to deny it and tate is going to dump her and they are both goin to spiral out of control and ohmygod!!!
So ummm I realise you've probably never heard of me but can I just say:
You are incredibly talented, holy cow this story is like amazing and perfect and there are a billion things I love about it because it's so well written and I've never read a story for so many hours and cried about Cori's situation and squealed when she was so forward with Tate and I love both your main character's they sound like the cutest couple ever. I love your story so much that I wrote a blog about it: here!. Anyway sorry for the ramble :s I apologise.