The Realm Eternal - Comments

@ Brian Haner Jr
yes, yes they are. Blonde moment XD

@ RachTheBat
Er...the others are all dead. It's many years into the future and Cap doesn't age anymore.

Hell yes! Awesome chapter, Thor is here! :D

That dick deserved to die, killing an innocent child. It wasn't Steve's fault at all, if they just took their heads out of their asses they would see that. I can see their point though, the heroes that were suppose to save them just upped and left. Will the others come back now?

More soon please :D

@ Brian Haner Jr
To Asgard!!!!

And you should be proud, this was awesome :D
I'm glad Thor's there, that now Captain knows he's not alone and that he has someone who still cares about him.
To Asgard!!!

Awe! Yay! Glad you updated. Missed this. :D

I do love this story so far... Love it, I tell you!

That little last part does make me wonder, though...
Eh. Anywhhooo... I do indeed look forward to reading more!

I do love this story so far... Love it, I tell you!

That little last part does make me wonder, though...
Eh. Anywhhooo... I do indeed look forward to reading more!

I do love this story so far... Love it, I tell you!

That little last part does make me wonder, though...
Eh. Anywhhooo... I do indeed look forward to reading more!

@ Juno
No way! You write Steve perfectly! :)

@ Brian Haner Jr
That's one of the reasons why I love this so much, you have the new with Steve, fighting and protecting the Earth, then you have the old with Thor. It really is perfect :D

@ Juno
Lies. All lies. Your half of this is just as epic my dear, never doubt that!
I love you too :D

@ RachTheBat_
Thank you so much for such kind words! I had this chapter mostly written for ages and just couldn't get it finished Then, bamn, inspired, finished it and there we are. I'm really loving this story and I can't wait to see what Alice does with her chapter! I like to think we have the perfect mix of old and new in this story!
Thanks for reading and again, for commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it all!!

You're way too good at writing this...
I feel my portions bring it down. :(
I will try though and work hard to make it up to some par of your caliber!
Love as always bub.
Onward to my computer....

This chapter..I like it, ANOTHER! (see what I did thurr)

When your wife learns the use of her cunt, come to me and speak, until then, keep your youth addled words to yourself and question my virility no more lest we all turn our questioning eyes on you. Handful of babes, ha! At least they are proof my cock works, you spoiled argr.”
I think that line just might be the best line I have ever read!

I love how obviously whipped Thor is, his queen doesn't need to say anything at all and he's slinking into his seat and hiding his face away. XD
She's right ya know, if you're going to be king, then you need to BE king! No pussy footing about.

I find myself being hypnotized, if you will, by your words. There are no needless big words that no one can understand, no over the top long and drawn out descriptions (which I am guilty of sometimes) and yet, you paint the perfect picture.

Thor watched on with a sinking gut as metal crashed, as egos clashed and noble men turned to tumbling fools
It's almost poetic, for want of a better word.

I love the queen! Reading about her makes me want to fist pump the air and shout "girl power" haha. She's such a BAMF queen, so calm and collected, I love her!

Oh, Thor's pissed, and rightly so! She fought like liquid fire, poised and perfect and utterly, completely, lethal. I bow down to you, oh great one! I could quote every single line in this chapter XD

Aww the fire kitty I still want one of those. I like the playful banter between Thor and Lúthnël, and all of his children. The little nudges towards Loki, I do hope he is still alive somewhere. If it is that the queen taught Loki, I wonder how he will feel and react towards her now. This chapter leaves me with so many questions and possibilities! You have such a beautiful mind :)

So, I just sat and Googled all of the phrases and names you use, just so I know what's going on and what they mean. Dedication that is! XD

Very much looking forward to the next instalment, this is probably my favourite active story on here!!

Oh my. Everybody is touchy touchy.
Well, I'm surprised that these gods don't think much of women. Hm.

The imagery in this chapter is so good. You wrote the fight scene extremely well, i was on the edge of my seat the whole time! I hope Thor doesn't give up on Earth, I know it isn't as powerful as Asgard but give us a little credit. Steve, you rock my socks, as always!
Brilliant chapter, like it's brothers before it. More soon :D

@ Brian Haner Jr
My pleasure :D

@ DaRkAnGeL448
Thank you for your comment! I'm so glad you're enjoying our story and I hope you continue to read and comment and enjoy :D
And right there with you, excited for Thor 2 and hoping they don't screw it up like they did Thor :D

Wow this was actually really well written. I loved it from the start. So much depth and I love your writing style. Very good. (Can't wait to see Thor 2, it comes out soon. Avengers 2 would be kinda awesome also.) sorry for that I'm just a huge fan of the heroes. Captain America is my favorite then Thor. But I love them all... UPDATE SOON OK. THIS IS GOING TO BE AWESOME.