The Realm Eternal - Comments

Loved this update! Thor's daughter is an amazing fighter. I do hope Thor doesn't turn his back on Earth though! That would be horrible. Looking forward to the next one. :)

Yes, yes he is adorable!!
I loved this, you did great bub and I'm always here to help, you know that :D
My turn!! D:

Lol I can never get enough of how the gods talk. I love it.
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@ unapalomayunaflor
Thank you so much for such an inspiring comment, it really means a lot to have someone love our work so much :D I hope you continue to enjoy what we do with this story.

@ Juno
Oh pssh, you rock bub :D

@ unapalomayunaflor
Thank you so much!
I admit that Jess is better at description than I am but I am trying to up my skills for this story. :)

My gosh this is beautiful! The writing is just...and the imagery...It is so hard to describe how amazing this story is. I kid you not the writing in this is the best I have seen in Mibba. I just can't get over the beauty in your writing. And I just realized two people wrote this story! You both are very talented and your guy's writing is beyond amazing. I applaud you both!

@ Brian Haner Jr
Uh, no no, the Queen isn't evil at all D:

Brilliant imagery in this chapter. The way the words just flow into each other, ah beautiful!
Oh Thor, you be pussy whipped bro. XD
Owned
Okay, that told them.
Oh Thor
I'm delighted to see who wears the pants in their relationship. Stay away from the puny human, you have a beautiful queen by your side. Love her by the way!
I love the sibling rivalry, I imagine them to be like mini Thor and Loki's. :D
I want a flame cat! It sounds so cute!
Loki laying with creatures? Such disgusting things running through my head. XD
Brilliant chapter! I enjoyed it muchly! I'm so glad you're both writing this, I've been looking for a good Avengers story for a while now. Very much looking forward to the next update!

@ Brian Haner Jr
Gah! Your response suggests evil... Damn.
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@ Hiding!Behind!Daryl
Well I don't know, you may just have to have an incredibly good reason behind hating her

Is it okay if I don't like the queen? Yea? K.
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@ Juno
You are more than "There's a tree." though that sentence made my day dude, loled at that part xD
You are epic and I always look forward to your work!!
I'm here to help when you need it.
I love you too bub :D

@ Angel of Vengeance
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it! As to the Queen, she's completely our creation. She's no where in the comics and her home world doesn't exist :) Thanks again for reading!!

i feel so, lesser than you, when it comes to writing. because you're all, *insert super descriptive awesome paragraph here* and i'm all, and there's a tree.

i loved the chapter.
now...if only i could start on mine...which i will...i promise.
like, tomorrow, because i work today.
i love you bub!

First off, I agree with Zacky Vengeance; about the banner. Same with the prologue. I highly enjoy this story. This first few chapters were amazing and definitely held the mysteriousness that I always look for when reading new things. You two are amazing writers. This is definitely a far cry from what I normally read, but it is also a breath of fresh air as well. Question: is the Queen really Elven in the comic books too??? I never knew that if she is and if not, well nice twist. :) I am definitely looking forward to more!

The way you write this is just amazing- so realistic! I really felt as though I was in the middle of the story, watching it all happen in front of me! I wish this had more comments, it's amazing so far!

First off, I totally love the banner. It's all mysterious and provoking- every time I look at it I feel like I'm going off into a magical world. Makes me sound like I'm on something, but whatever.

Even the prologue intriqued me to read further- your description and attention to detail is just incredible. It's all quite mysterious, especially not giving the main voice of this chapter a name- which lets the reader wonder who it really is. I love the last like We will wage our war with Earth. It builds up so much suspense and ideas for the rest of the story, I can't wait.

Now, the second chapter is such a stark contrast to the first, yet it was still amazing. Poor Steve for having to fit into normal society. But the part where he saved the little girl- it still shows he's doing what he loves.
I love this so far, even though I don't normally read Avengers fanfics, but I'm excited for more!

Aww poor Steve, all he wants is to save people with his friends by his side :(
They'll soon be changing their minds when those large figures get started! Moore soon :D

Poor Steve, I feel so bad for him. He's alone in a world that doesn't want him and he's got no one by his side. How dare they treat him the way they do, without respect and as if he's the scum of the earth. Screw all you guys

Loved the update bub!! :D My turn now

I am so ready for this story. The prologue was fabulous and really pulled me in, dying to figure out who the first few characters were and how things are going to play -- between the prologue and the summary, so many questions to be answered. I can't wait to see how this story plays out.