Come Down to Me - Comments

awwww omg this chapter was so cute. i really like the way you portray sid in this one. and leah is great too, she's so relaxed and easy-going, i love it. literally everything you write is such a joy to read and i can't get enough of it! you're such a fantastic writer!!

love the chapter and story...the two of them are very sweet together

Adorkable, simply adorkable!!!

So many gems in this one....Taylor busting Sid's chops, Taylor laughing out loud at Sid's feeble moves in the movie theatre and the always amusing reference to Sid's hands not fitting in his pockets.

The innuendos and emotional landmines were also plentiful - Taylor telling Leah “Never fall asleep first”, Sid admitting “I’m not used to sleeping with someone” and Leah cursing her "fucking friends" status - illustrating the deep struggle of a real relationship with Sid.

But the banter between Sid and Leah - both verbal and internal - was a masterpiece to behold. The way you put your readers into your characters mind space is truly amazing. We really get how they are feeling!

But I love the fact that Leah is soo in control here - she knows that something is going on here, but does not impose upon her "friend zone" status and get what both of them ultimately want.

That is a lot more self-control than I could ever muster!!

so so so cute, i melted.

Ugh so cute. I love that Taylor and Leah got along so great and were able to tagteam tease Sid. They need to realize they like each other and kiss kiss now!

I really love this story. They are too cute together. I like that Sidney is opening up to her. This is really sweet!

loved this chapter! i love that they're taking it so slowly and all of the cuddling was wonderful :)

Awe these two are very sweet together. I really enjoyed reading that.

Ouch! Hoping to meet a girl like the girl you're off to meet, just ouch!

I love how you build your characters and your stories. And your dialog is wonderful, both internal and audible!

How do you like me now?-style! Classic!

AMAZING!!!!!!!!

I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is great, I love that their thoughts parallel each other. And I loved the description of Sid as "a big cat, ropy and strong." I could totally picture that! I also liked the little twist where Leah went up and sang!

So happy to see another story from you on Mibba. I love how you write the Pens and am always glad to see updates.

Hhahahaha, its like they are both anxious teenagers!!!! i think I may have said that in my last comment, but its so true!! I loved this. I had some good laughs throughout too, you woman, are a comedian, I just know it!!!

“You left out the part where you won American Idol.” - I loved that, smooth Crosby! I cant wait for more of this...

Just friends....not for long!

Great chapter! It's so cute them getting to know one another.. And Sid wanting to get invited in, typical boy lol
Nice job

Loving it!! So much tension because they both like each other but they don't know that the other one feels that way! Update soon!!

Wow! There were so many great lines in this that had me laughing out loud. Sid is so awkward! I love it. And really, accosting the poor kid to get at his aunt. Lol that was great, then the teenage awkwardness at the Zamboni entrance, oh boy. Lol I can't wait for more! Please please update soon! Your humor is great!!!

You are seriously my favorite writer to read on Mibba!! I love it all!!! Did doesn't matter what you write or who it's about it's always amazing!! I love this story already!!!!

i seriously don't even care who you write about - anything you create is pure GOLD. love it though, love sid too!! thank you so much!

I subscribed before I even started reading because I knew I would love it! I can't wait to see where this goes, Sid is such a cutie pie. Now they both just have to make it through the awkward, unwanted friend stage!