Carrying the Fire - Comments

Hey guys (anyone still reading?)!

Sooo i know its been awhile since I've updated, but with such a lack of response on this site besides one, maybe two people that provide feedback and the real pain to format the chapters, I probably wont be updating on mibba. Theres quite a few chapters updated, so if anyone wishes to continue reading can find this story of wdff or ff.net

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! I figured Maggie would be the one to make Daryl go back and check up on Olive. I think the conversation between Olive and Carol was a great idea. It needed to happen if Olive ever wants this baby to be born. I hope the prison group will meet up with her once again soon! I wonder when she'll become apart of their family? I do understand the reason you have flashbacks of Olive's survival in the past. You have to present her backstory to us.

I loved the update, and I hope you'll find the time to update again!

Thanks PourquoiBella and Kickass Alice ^_^
I'll try to hurry with the next chapter!

Finally, they meet!XD I hope there will be more encounters to come! This is getting exciting!XD I hope you update as soon as possible! I can't wait for more!

Hey, sorry I didn't see your response until now! I loved the update & am excited for more. It was very fluid this time (space wise) and very in character for both Maggie & Daryl. Yeah, I only got through about half of what was on Netflix so far - so no Woodbury yet. Good luck writing :)

Yet again, I can't thank you enough for your support and comments every chapter<3
Im trying to get the next chapter out asap :]

Whoa, that was a very long chapter!XDDD I loved the update and it totally makes up for the two month wait! But again, I understand why it took so long to update. This story is fanning out quite superbly if I might say so myself! I can't wait for more, and I hope to see you update as soon as you possibly can!

Oh&&btw I think it might be your mobile, but I have been meaning to space out the paragraphs more so it's easier for a mobile read.

Why thank :]]]
I really appreciate your feedback PorquoiBella!
Ohh, how far have you seen into TWD? Because I can understand how Woodbury's backstory might not be so interesting since it's so OC for some people. Haha, well I'm sorry to say that there will be a flashback every three chapters, but don't fear, their meeting is soon to come.

I'm sorry for such a wait guys! I'm almost finished with chapter eight, just try to bear with me!

One other suggestion (might be different because I'm mobile), try breaking up into slightly shorter paragraphs for better fluidity.

Amazing! I'll preface my review by saying I've never actually watched all of TWD, but love reading fiction after it. I really enjoy how you write details & thoughts. You are thorough and really well researched in what you've got going! Only thing I'm more interested in is her meeting in the next chapter. To be totally honest, I pay less attention to her flash backs & actually skipped more than I care to admit in the chapters dedicated to her time with Merle/whomever. I'm dying for the next chapter (providing it does go straight to her meeting & not more back story). Good luck!

Thank you sooo much Kickass Alice & itsparamashayall !
You can't imagine how awesome it is to hear you're good thoughts on this story<3

I can't wait to see what Kickass Alice makes!
I'll try to have the next chapter up asap

Ive been reading this story since like, chapter 1 and I love how much it's progressed since. Not too fast but not too slow. Also, I LOVE how long and descriptive each chapter is. I love your writing and I cant wait to read more updates!

I loved the update! Now, things are getting interesting! I love the direction you are taking with this story so much! This story line is so amazing! I hope you update as soon as you possibly can! Finally, Daryl and Olive have met, once again and hopefully he doesn't try to kill her like that other prick in the woods. Maybe, Maggie will convince him not to harm her, and Olive has the advantage of pregnancy even if she doesn't want to use that as a reason not to spare her life. I believe Team Prison will all agree once they see her situation with the coming birth. If not, Hershel will be the voice of reason, and I'm pretty sure Rick will see something in Olive of his wife, Lori, but that's if he's not done going insane from her death.
I don't mind the long wait. I understand, you have been busy with work and other things. If you want, I have the ability to make banners. Do you want me to make you one for this story? I've been meaning to ask you this. Send me in a message of an actress or who you want Olive to be portrayed as and I can make you one. I really want to because I'm in love with this TWD fanfiction. I can also put the banner on Tumblr.com to gain you more readers. Just let me know if there is anything specific you want in the banner or anything you can think of.

Awww, thanks! As always I can't wait until the next chapter is up!

Thanks so much Kickass Alice! ^____^
I know I know, I loathe them too, but I promise I'll make up for it next chapter.
Daryl huh? Hmmm, well you'll just have to wait and seeee ;]

But I seriously love your support, my dear<3
I'll try to get the next chapter out asap!

I hate cliffhangers!X( I hope Daryl was the one who attacked her. I loved the update as always! I hope you update as soon as possible! I promise as always to read and review! This is getting so good!XDDD I can't wait to read more! It reads like a book!

As always, I love the update and hope to see you update soon! You did portray Milton and Philip quite well! This chapter was amazing! I'm so excited to see you update again!

Awwwuh ^__^
you guys're awesome<3

I'm so glad you two are enjoying this story. We shall have to see how their run in goes if/whenever it happens ;]

I loved the update as always! Your writing is amazing! Keep up writing this amazing story! I'm not worthy of reading such an superb TWD fan fiction! Lol I hope you update as soon as possible! I'll always read! Just send me a message and I'll be happy to read and give you a review! I agree with itsparamshayall, I hope she runs into Daryl and the others again too! I hope they don't scare her off like last time, but I understand why it had to happen. It makes the story much more interesting! I hope her baby is alright!