Carrying the Fire - Comments

  • itsparamshayall

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    I really love this story. The first chapter was my absolute favorite! I was always interested in Woodbury's history, and it was really well written! I love how much detail you put into everything and Im interested to see if she runs in with Daryl (and the others) again. Smile
    March 25th, 2013 at 04:39am
  • carniwhore;;

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    Thank you Kickass Alice and LifeXchanger!
    I love hearing your feedback :]

    Ill try having the next chapter up asap!
    March 23rd, 2013 at 08:49pm
  • LifeXchanger

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    Hopeful you update soon I love it
    March 23rd, 2013 at 07:04pm
  • Kickass Alice

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    I loved the update! Clap Thumb up I hope you update as soon as possible! Mr. Green Mr. Green
    March 21st, 2013 at 03:07am
  • carniwhore;;

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    Thank you, I'm stoked you liked it!
    Im sorry about Zhao haha, I know I totally debated bringing him into the Woodbury group but I didnt want to seem like I was trying to mimick team prison. Poor guy had to be used to represent how brutally the Outbreak hit Atlanta.
    I'll try to post up chapter 3 here asap! Thanks again for your review!
    March 19th, 2013 at 08:34am
  • Kickass Alice

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    This is very well written, I don't know why anyone hasn't already commented, yet! Clap When Zhao died, I freaking almost cried! I got attached to his character in the short while that he was there by Olive's side. Crying or Very sad I believe this story is perfect in every single way, and I loved how you incorporated The Governor and the other survivors of Woodbury. When you update, let me know, I'll read and comment always!Mr. Green I hope Olive meets up with the Prison before the Governor's minions capture her! Keep it up, I'm in love with this story!::thumbsup:
    March 19th, 2013 at 01:12am