I'll Paint You Wings, and I'll Set You Free - Comments

  • Forever Young.

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    xalimarie:
    i normally don't comment on anything but this was so good that i have to. i hope you post more!
    thank you for commenting! it means a lot to me <3
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:27pm
  • Forever Young.

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    ForeverAlyssa:
    THIS IS AMAZING, mostly because it hits home with me, because I have Idiopathic thrombocytopenic purpura, which is a blood disease (I'm thanking the Gods it's not cancer) that I get on and off which will make me go into the hospital for 4-5 days, then get out for about 6 months then i have to go in 4-5 days, with weekly blood tests, and with the platelet/ blood transfer, i know so much about so i know Martin's pain.
    i'm so sorry to hear what you have to go through :( I remember coming across that blood disease when i researching! i am so glad you enjoyed the story though<3
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • Forever Young.

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    blablabla3000:
    Amazing. Great story. One of the few stories on here that actually made me feel something. Most of the things posted in here try to post the same effect that this story had but usually I just stop thinking about it and move on to the next story. But when Martin died, holy crap, the suddenness of it... Lets just say I was... Taken aback...yeah... And when the story ended, it was a bittersweet moment for me.
    You did an awesome job, my friend. Hopefully you do end up posting the afterword part!
    so glad you enjoyed it! <33
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:25pm
  • Forever Young.

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    More please I. Need. More.. Like you don't understand how simply amazing this was and like I don't even know how to make this comment more in depth or something.
    aw thank you, i really appreciate it c:
    <3
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • Forever Young.

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    pshhitshannah:
    FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD AND HOLY POST THE NEXT PART PLEASE!!! i also love your stories and this was no exception. please?
    thank you so much! hopefully you like the epilogue as well :)
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • Forever Young.

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    @ krysta189
    i did a lot of research but there's only so much you can find on the internet. i go to a school with a very big nursing program so i took what i found out on the internet and from a few of my friends and sort of threw it all together. hopefully i at least got some things right!
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:20pm
  • krysta189

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    This story was amazing.. So perfect omg... I was just wondering, how did you get the info or whatever to write the nursing part? Like was that accurate with what nurses actually do or just sort of like improvising?
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:09pm
  • mixtape-of-her-bands

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    aww happy endings are great! and now everyone is happy :) thank you for writing an epilogue!
    April 16th, 2013 at 05:08pm
  • fiction246

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    I love it :) wonderful ending!!! I'm glad that Alex stayed okay :)
    April 16th, 2013 at 10:20am
  • onelove1luv

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    I smiled the entire time I was reading the epilogue, it's so wonderful!
    April 16th, 2013 at 07:57am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    That was beautiful. This may have only been a one shot hut i don't want to let it go. It was so beautiful!
    April 16th, 2013 at 07:23am
  • KiwiiYDG

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    Ohmygod this was beyond perfect. I cried when Martin died, and you wrote it so well. I connected with the characters and you portrayed them very well and this is one of my favorite fanfics ever :) keep it up, doll. <3
    April 16th, 2013 at 06:59am
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    awh this is so cute, ugh i just love omg. I was just weirdly grinning at my computer the entire time i was reading this okay? Everything about this is perfect.
    April 16th, 2013 at 03:32am
  • Gaskarthloveme

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    Fuck this was just perfect. Omg, I love this so so so so much. It was just a perfect ending. Never getting over the moron part.
    April 16th, 2013 at 03:26am
  • Iceyythepenguin

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    oh lord my heart can't take all this perfectness I'm done and the whole moron thing at the end made me think of everything in the story and I just wow okay going to sob now bye.
    April 16th, 2013 at 03:03am
  • Breepocket

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    Awww this was so adorable. I'm so glad you wrote more to it because its amazing.
    April 16th, 2013 at 12:39am
  • SignalFire

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    The epilogue had a massive grin on my face from start to finish and I caught myself "Awwing" out loud so many times! Loved it! What a perfect way to end it and I loved how you kept progressing it to different times instead of sticking on a particular date!
    April 16th, 2013 at 12:13am
  • Mrs.Barakat

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    It was so amazing! Almost started crying when Martin died!! :( Please post another part to this! I love it!! (: <3 great job!
    April 14th, 2013 at 05:06pm
  • SignalFire

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    This was so amazingly perfect! You managed to have the perfect mix of all the emotions! I couldn't stop reading and when I got to the end I wished there was more to read!
    You nailed the way you developed Jack and Alex's relationship. It was exactly how it should have been and I loved the way they gradually got closer and closer! I would love to read more about their lives together! I hope you post it!

    Great job!!
    April 12th, 2013 at 04:15am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Crying, actual tears are being shed here. It was beautiful and heart breaking, but so well written and god, I just want to cuddle with this goddamn story.
    Please post more!
    April 11th, 2013 at 07:17pm