I'll Paint You Wings, and I'll Set You Free - Comments

  • PorcelainBlue

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    This broke my heart, no joke. I wanted so much more!! Please please continue this, I would be so very grateful :)
    April 10th, 2013 at 04:17am
  • KaatieeATL

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    this was perfect! like no words. incredible. the story didn't even get uninteresting at any point. as soon as i started reading it i couldnt stop. it was just incredible! just wow
    April 10th, 2013 at 03:04am
  • abcdefg3333333

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    This is so goddamn perfect
    I have to admit I cried when Martin died oh god and jack and Alexs relationship is so interesting please post the sequel for this xxxxxxx
    April 9th, 2013 at 05:42pm
  • QuirkyAnecdote

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    Okay, so this is completely and utterly perfect, your character development was amazing. My chest hurts from all the emotion I've felt and poor Martin. But seriously, this is one of the best things I've read, the storyline, your descriptions and writing style -everything is just so good. Fantastic job!

    And I'd love to read more about Jack and Alex's life! It'll be interesting to see what would happen with Alex after he gets out of the clinic.
    April 9th, 2013 at 04:51pm
  • rararacheeh

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    basically. everything you write is perfect and that's it.
    April 9th, 2013 at 11:11am
  • mixtape-of-her-bands

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    I was on the verge of tears all the time and then it came all out in the end :'( this was so amazing and sad and also cute and heartbreaking :(
    April 9th, 2013 at 03:26am
  • insignificant_carbon

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    this was amazing. I want to fly into the sun it's so good jfc. Pleasepleasepleaseplease write about them being together and jack fucking alex because jalex buttsex is the best. (As long as Alex is bottom) BUT PLEASE WRITE MORE!
    April 9th, 2013 at 02:44am
  • screamyourheartout

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    JUST SO GOOD I NEVER HAVE WORDS
    April 8th, 2013 at 09:57pm
  • whiskey_princess

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    Yet again another truly amazing story from you. I can't even begin to explain how seriously jealous i am of your writing talent!
    Please post more too this because its perfect and i want to know what happens!
    You could be a best selling author one day! :)
    April 8th, 2013 at 07:56pm
  • onelove1luv

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    That was so beautiful and well thought out. I'd love to read more:)
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:37pm
  • missbeckylouise

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    oh my god, please post more because I think this is the best thing I've ever read. I love it so much, and I was seriously so close to crying, you're an amazing writer so please post more parts!
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:31pm
  • fiction246

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    Not ashamed to say that I am crying right now. This was absolutely beautiful. You should definitely post more. I feel so sorry for Zack. That really sucked :( but this is so beautiful!!!
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:15pm
  • Chazmataz

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    This was so great I was close to tears by the end. Please post the next bit :)
    April 8th, 2013 at 12:00pm
  • Ace Lightning.

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    this was so heartbreakingly beautiful. thank you for writing this!!!!!
    April 8th, 2013 at 11:23am
  • pineapplesmiles

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    ahhh this is so good i wish i could write half as good as you!!!
    April 8th, 2013 at 11:16am
  • f0reverbr0ken

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    This was perfect and I'm still crying.
    The characters were perfect and I would love to see more about them.
    April 8th, 2013 at 10:35am
  • Stained_GlassEyes

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    This is amazing and so well written! Please post the other part! :)
    April 8th, 2013 at 09:04am
  • Hopelessmolly

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    WOW this story was absolutely amazing. It was so emotionally involved it made me feel like that Alex was real. It was awesome please write more i loved it! Also thanks for making me cry over Martin and zack lovely so kind of you
    April 8th, 2013 at 08:26am
  • inactiveaccount-2013

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    JESUS FUCKING CHRIST. THIS IS SO AMAZING WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE IT.

    I am an emotional wreck right now, but it's okay, since most of my feelings are happy because of fluff, but I'm still crying about Martin, even though we knew he was going to die. You wrote everything so perfectly, and just ugh. I can't even form sentences write now.

    Please please please post the rest you have written. I already love this , and I know the next part will just make me love it more.

    Also, you should be notified that this story is going on my mental list of amazing Jalex stories that are actual perfection. You deserve all the praise for this, b/c holy shit this story is beautiful. You conveyed everything so well, I am speechless. Ugh. Gonna go cry happy tears from how beautiful this story is now.
    April 8th, 2013 at 07:36am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    Oka you NEED to post the sequel or whatever. No if ands or buts about it you NEED to. This hurt me so much, especially since Zack wasn't there to say goodbye to Martin. Like... I knew it was going to happen but I still cried. And I'm happy Alex is better and he made friends with marley even if it's just a cat. Oh my gosh I loovvvvveeeeed this!
    April 8th, 2013 at 07:12am