April 8th, 2016 at 01:29am
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Talent. A very good read. Your character development is definitely a strong suit. Most writers, myself included, would not be able to create a character like Cora. The only real critique I would have is to be more descriptive to help draw the readers in.
Keep up the good work. It's not often I read a story that makes me feel this bad for a character haha. Good job :)