Dance Until We Die - Comments

Thanks @ danielle_12! Glad you found it and like it.

I found this story today and omg it's really good! I love that there are two stories going on at once. I'm waiting on Hank's reaction...

@ defaultmemory
I am going to try and update once a day until I get the rest of this up. I have about 8 chapters left.

I hope you can update soon.... really want to know what happens when Hank gets there.

That's awesome your daughter got a puck from Hartsy, he sounds like a bit ol' teddy bear I was LOL'ing the whole time with Sean and the girls, I love the back and forth and Bethany throwing a drink at Mason was badass. Can't wait to read more

My guess is that Mason only wanted the chase. Once he bedded the previously untouched Bethany, he bragged about the conquest to all his buddies in the locker room, made her the butt of jokes, then dropped her like yesterday's newspaper. I think he broke her trust, embarrassed her, and broke her heart. And that's probably best case scenario.

WTF did Mason do, I don't like this guy already

@ Ladyfiaran
Hank is perfection.

That was so cute, Hank is such a gentleman

@ Ladyfiaran
It makes me want to write more with them. I see them as this really teasing and playful bunch but with this deep sense of family loyalty and support. Does that make sense?

Hahah, I was smiling the whole time reading that. I love having all the Staal boys together, they must really tease the hell out of each other in real life

Hahah, I love Sean Avery being a douche

That was such a sweet chapter, I'd love to see Hank riding a horse

@ Ladyfiaran
I very much enjoy writing them; it's fun trying to figure them all out. Keep an eye out for Jared; he turns up later with the other three.

I was smiling the whole time reading this, I love the Staal boys and Jordan is such a huge flirt in this chapter. And I love how the boys take the piss out of each other the whole time, typical brothers

@ Ladyfiaran
I was trying to come up with something very NYC for a first date but knowing it'd be amped up with it being Hank and all. He had to do something very impressive to hook Bethany's attention.

@ jazter
Sorry about that confusion.

As for Jordan, I don't honestly know....he just seems like he'd be a flirt to me. There's something in his smile.

Hank, is such a gentleman and that was an awesome surprise. And all the Staal boys are hot

ooooooh, now I get it. I did get the notifications, for Untitled hank Project, then you renamed it. ooooooh. I kinda feel dumb I didn't put it together. ah, well. (kinda liked the old title, it was amusing to me).

very strange; I only got one update even though you've updated multiple times since I last read this story. Mibba is so inconsistent with its notifications, it's very frustrating as a reader, I can only imagine how annoying it must be for an author!

Poor Danny, never gets the girl. But good luck to Marc and esp. Hank.

I know that Jordan is fanon slutty but is that canon? Enquiring minds want to know!