Her Love to Bury - Comments

Came here from comment swap. :)

And it was soooooooooo fitting, literally just finished a horror movie binge to get this in the swap. Anyway, I loved the prologue. Definitely drew me in with the description. The way you were blunt right away with this is just one of those scary stories with the ghosts that you tell over the campfire, etc. etc. It really was eloquently designed. Personally, there'd be no way I'm buying a house that fast or that my boyfriend is going anywhere my first night in the house. Heck no. Just some believability in the plot advice, though little is needed for a ghost story. I'm already yelling at your characters lol. I also liked the concept of speaking from the ghost's point of view, not a common choice and certainly refreshing for the genre. I might be babbling, this hasn't been updated in a very long time...

So truthfully I'd like to wish you two luck in your writing adventures and I hope all fairs well for the lovely girl and her first house. :P

(Comment Swapper here)

Hello, I seem to be stuck on this story still for some reason but I'll have a deeper look. I really like the idea of a co-write and I hope if you ever pick up this story again ( I can see it's been quite a while) that it all goes well for you. The speech so far has been done very well I think, it's realistic and easy to follow :) Good luck with all your writing and I'm excited to see where this goes!

(Comment Swapper here)

Hello, I seem to be stuck on this story still for some reason but I'll have a deeper look. I really like the idea of a co-write and I hope if you ever pick up this story again ( I can see it's been quite a while) that it all goes well for you. The speech so far has been done very well I think, it's realistic and easy to follow :) Good luck with all your writing and I'm excited to see where this goes!

[Comment Swap]

First off, I agree with the Mibbian below, the layout is a bit light but that doesn't draw away from the story's essence and suspense. Just from reading the title, I knew I would be enticed. I enjoyed the prologue, but wished that there could be more than three chapters. Hopefully, you authors ban together and write another chapter!

Hey, comment swapper here.

Few points - the layout is pretty, but it may be better if the background of the text is slightly more opaque, for ease of reading.
There are a couple of spelling mistakes, such as 'Prologue' but nothing major, and I know how much of a pain proofreading can be ( I suck at it)

However, the prologue does open the story nicely and give an idea as to what kind of story this will be which I like :)

Good luck with your writing!

Hey, comment swapper here.

Few points - the layout is pretty, but it may be better if the background of the text is slightly more opaque, for ease of reading.
There are a couple of spelling mistakes, such as 'Prologue' but nothing major, and I know how much of a pain proofreading can be ( I suck at it)

However, the prologue does open the story nicely and give an idea as to what kind of story this will be which I like :)

Good luck with your writing!

The layout is nice, and the title too, so kudos on that.
The story flows well, a few mistakes her and there, nothing major though, Overall it's good. Your descriptions are nice and the general feel of the story is good. Nice job.

Hi, from Comment Swap!

To start, I have to say, it's spelled, "Prologue" not "Prolouge" but little misspellings can get the best of us.

I also really liked the introduction, and how it seems like the story itself knows it's a campfire horror story. I find that really cool.

@Hush Ruby

Thanks so much! And I've caught a few episodes here and there but not reaslly as much as I wanted. Thank you so much though!

@On Angel's Wings

Thank you! I really really REALLY appreciate it!

This is really good you keep it too the point and it flows really well ... Can't wait to read more :) Subscribed and recommended

Have you guys ever watched American Horror Story ? This reminds me of that amazing show, because the family moves into a haunted home without knowing because it was in a nice area, very cheap, and they needed a place to stay. Anyways, this story is just.. perfect. I'm so looking forward to what happens in the future (:

@Katie Mosing

Awe! Thanks love! Keep reading please! We love our faithful followers

You guys are awesome writers! I love how similar your writing styles are. I could barely tell the change between the chapters. I love ghost stories and things like that so this is very intriguing! I hope it gets super creepy and I can't wait to see what happens!

@eminems_stan93

thank you so much. keep reading! we love faithful followers

I really liked this, I think it's very interesting and I'd love to read more. From comment swap, by the way. I hadn't found any spelling or gramatical mistakes I need to talk about so that's good. I liked the chapter lengths, not too short or two long. Your writing seems to flow really nicely and I like the main character, both of you are great writers (I just remembered there were two of you lol) keep writing I think it's brilliant. :)

The story is really good. The pace is rather slow, but that in itself is a good thing I guess.

Thank you so much!

This sounds like it's going to be an interesting story! I like that it's written in the perspective of the ghost as well as the perspective of the girl moving in, who happens to not believe in ghosts. Both of your writing styles are great as well! I can't wait to read more and see how this plays out!

@wonderyear?
thanks so much for the lovely compliments. please keep reading to see where it goes!

So I actually really love this story. The way you two write is great. The descriptions in the Prologue and first chapter were amazing. Also the characters are really likable so far and they seem really realistic. I'm interested in seeing this story progress.

Also, I actually live like an hour away from Saint Augustine and it's really interesting seeing it used in a story.