Her Love to Bury - Comments

@ Grotesque.
You are the absolute loveliest! Honestly! Thank you a million times over for always having such a kind word to say in your reviews!

Comment Swap
Hi,

Reporting in. I'm so glad I found this story. I have Mibba friends who recced this and I was willing to find it and read it soon, but I guess comment swap read my mind. I just read the prologue and as far as it goes? It's absolutely amazing, breath taking. Your way of describing things are so flawless. I'm definitely reading more, subbing, and reccing.

Thanks! we really do appreciate all the feedback. keep reading

I really like the descriptions and how the dialogue flows, it doesn't seem forced at all, which is really nice. I normally wouldn't read a story like this, but the way you guys write it makes me want to find out what happens to her, how the ghost reacts to her living there and changing things, and if she ends up believeing and leaving or if she'll stay.

Keep writing!

@bake jake a cake
thanks for the wonderful compliments!

So comment swap brought me to this story. This isn't the kind of stuff I normally read but it's very well written and clearly you both have a broad vocabulary which shows in the amount of detail you use. You also describe your characters well but I don't feel a n emotional connection to them yet. Maybe that's just because its still early in the story. You use a lot of dialogue but its balanced out well with the descriptive bits of text about what's going on just make sure the dialogue doesn't consume the story. I hope that makes sense? But with short chapters its easy to get carried about with using dialogue to move the plot along and I'd hate to see that happen to this story. But yeah keep it up and I hope this comment helps even if I am kind of an amateur writer.

@ dream'n.reality.
Thanks, hon! It just took me to one of your stories as well and it was amazing! I know it's soooo much shorter but I kinda don't know where to take it yet as it's a co-write and I'm trying to find my groove before writing those super long chapters. Thanks again for the encouragement! You're a peach!

I was glad when comment swap took me here! Mostly because of the fact that I loved your other story. When I read the prologue, I was surprised to see how short it was, not saying in a bad way..just the other story had soo long of a chapter. I was expecting to read more, but it was good:) kudos on it and good job!

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
I do very much appreciate you taking the time to read the first few chapters! That being said, the summary could possibly be a touch more attention grabbing as far as content. In regards to length though I don't believe there is an issue as a summary is meant to be succinct and to the point, giving a brief overview but not giving away the plot. Thanks so much for the kind words, doll!

Dear authors, thanks to the comment swap feature I came to read this of yours. The summary in my opinion has to be edited because it's really short and it's not grabbing the readers attention. Try making it more interesting, add a question or a hint about what she'll find there...something to make the reader want to read the first chapter. Your writing abilities are great seeing as I liked the way the chapters were written. Your attention to detail and the flow of the story are marvelous. You are off to a good start. ~Marian.

Dear authors, thanks to the comment swap feature I came to read this of yours. The summary in my opinion has to be edited because it's really short and it's not grabbing the readers attention. Try making it more interesting, add a question or a hint about what she'll find there...something to make the reader want to read the first chapter. Your writing abilities are great seeing as I liked the way the chapters were written. Your attention to detail and the flow of the story are marvelous. You are off to a good start. ~Marian.