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  • shortygirl

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    You killed Brian! How could you?!? The only person that made her happy. I think I'm gonna cry..
    December 31st, 2013 at 08:24pm
  • HanerJoy

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    I'm gonna be another one to send a mob after you :( I'm literally about to cry :(

    But on the other hand I'm glad Taylor is dead, and this was an amazing chapter.

    I'm still gonna send that mob after you.
    December 31st, 2013 at 06:27pm
  • helena_88

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    i'm gonna go hide in a corner and cry my eyes out.. what a way to start the last day of 2013... O.o *sobs*
    you killed off gates..??
    i dunno if i wanna send the mob after you for that or not Ha Ha
    no but seriously though. awesome chapter and to be honest i had a feeling that gates would at least end up shot but maybe not killed.. if he really didn't make it Sad
    December 31st, 2013 at 11:05am
  • MoMo_92

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    Brian nooooooooo Crying or Very sad I can't believe he is gone Crying or Very sad it's not fair Crying or Very sad at least Taylor is gone, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 31st, 2013 at 03:04am
  • heretic.

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    Glad I could be of some use, I'll be on hand for the next chapter Whistle haha.

    I hope you know, I'm ugly crying right now missy! *SOB* Why oh why did I agree to the idea to kill him off?! Haha. Oh man, my heart is broken :( Anyone but Gates!

    Ahem. This was an awesome chapter though, honey! Pssh, what writer's block? Haha. The whole time I was reading, I was on the edge of my proverbial seat, great action scene! I pictured it all so clearly, amazing! And, I know, I know, a great story has to have tragedy and I am so glad Rev finally got his revenge and put a bullet between Taylor's eyes but but.. Gates! *still ugly crying*

    More please! :D
    December 31st, 2013 at 01:53am
  • gothique4

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    Yay for mojo coming back and can I say what an awesome chapter. I just loved to see Shadows show a little bit of a carefree side for a moment, even though ATL suddenly calling put a bit of a damper on it.

    Gotta love pervy ol' Vengeance. Good to see some things don't change lol
    November 5th, 2013 at 11:29am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 5th, 2013 at 10:26am
  • helena_88

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    oh gosh is it just me that feels so goddamn sorry for shadows?? he was right, letting his guard down to have some fun would only end up with something bad happening.. but at least he got to have a tiny bit of fun....

    ooh that's awesome!! i've ONLY got 5 days left HOUPEPOFJSÖIEHTSA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahah
    November 3rd, 2013 at 12:24pm
  • heretic.

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    It's alive! :D I'm glad you got your mojo back!

    I loved this chapter, they do all need to relax and have a little fun once in a while, even Shadows haha. Please make Izzy and Gates stay together forever? *flutters eyelashes* I'll give you extra rum in Birmingham if you do haha!

    oooo what does Mr Gaskarth want then? The plot thickens!

    Can't wait for more :D
    November 3rd, 2013 at 12:18pm
  • HanerJoy

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    I know something bad is gonna happen but I hope the guys and Izzie get through that alive.
    November 3rd, 2013 at 06:10am
  • MusicFan

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    Great update! I'm so happy to see that this story is back:)
    November 3rd, 2013 at 05:31am
  • shortygirl

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    Why must Zacky be such a dick? It would kill him to have some fun. I loved the pool scene though.
    November 3rd, 2013 at 04:47am
  • CountSynula

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    Aw I loved the update! I liked the playfulness with the pool scene and the water war. Was a nice touch. Glad to see this story is still alive. Mr. Green
    November 3rd, 2013 at 03:26am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Ohmyfuckness!! Please tell me you will be updating this story!! I love it!! I love Zacky's character I think it fits him perfectly
    October 14th, 2013 at 08:35pm
  • MusicFan

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    @ purple89
    I'm sooo excited to see what you come up with! I would love to see Shadows and Izzy get back together:) I can't wait for the next update!
    August 10th, 2013 at 06:42am
  • Leaving Memories

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    @ purple89
    *fan girls* That'd be so cute! And a good plot twist. But there's been so many plot twists and yummy goodiness! I can't wait to see what you have in store.
    August 9th, 2013 at 11:46pm
  • purple89

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    @ MusicFan
    @ Leaving Memories
    Love the banter In the comments section!! Don't worry. You may be surprised....it's still early! Shadows and izzy may get together!!
    August 9th, 2013 at 08:30am
  • MusicFan

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    @ Leaving Memories
    Thank you lol yeah her heart belongs with Shadows. Like you said her and Gates were cute, but her and Shadows need to get back together and fast lol
    August 9th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • Leaving Memories

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    @ MusicFan
    Right? I mean she was cute with Gates and all, but I think her heart belongs with Shadows.
    August 8th, 2013 at 07:45am
  • MusicFan

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    @ Leaving Memories
    I got so excited when I read your comment lol because I've been team Shadows/Izzy by myself and it's nice to finally see that someone else is on their team as well lol
    August 8th, 2013 at 05:56am