25 - Comments

Wait... So Izzy and Gates were only pretending to break up? That's no fun.... I want her and Shadows to kind of repair their mended hearts.....

But! What a fantastic chapter! I'm so happy Zacky got to kill Andy. Zacky may be an ass, but I don't want to see him in pain and agony, he's still on the good side!

Kill Night! Kill Night!

Anyways, update soon, lovely. This was amazing!

** ooo not poop hahaha

You and your bloody plot twists!! Haha. I started panicking then thinking they were gonna split up! D: poop it's getting good now, the guys are gonna team up with gontier to take down the bastard that is Night!! I can't help but think something's gonna go wrong though :/

Looking forward to the next update!!

I love this, but you and your plot twists woman!!!! Thank god that Brian and Izzy were only acting, as I love them together. It was certainly a good plan as it showed that Gontier was really having second thoughts about nutty ol Andy.

I'm glad that Zacky got his vengeance (yes pun intended) but I was kinda hoping he would have tortured him for a bit first

Loved the update

Great update! I think I'm the only one that was hoping that the breakup between Izzy and Gates was real lol (I will always ship Izzy and Shadows lol) and I'm so glad Zacky got his revenge! Cant wait for the next update and I hope you have a great time on your trip!:)

Definitely a favorite chapter. I totally did not see that one coming. I am so GLAD that Izzy and Gates were just acting. You really pulled the rug out from under me. Love how this is turning out. Have a great trip!!!

Holy shiz! This was probably one off my favorite chapters of any story I've ever read. I love how all of the little loose ends tied together towards the end of the chapter and I'm super excited to see how they pull together, cuz somebody's gotta kill Jake Night! And yay for Vengeance's revenge :) can't wait for the next update!! Hope you guys have fun on your trip, that sounds like it's gonna be amazing!

Shit went down in this chapter first Brian and Izzy I really thought tht they broke up but I don't think they did but they seriously need to talk and Brian stop interrupting her and let her explain Jesus Christ I hate when men do tht like seriously shut the fuck up u dont even kno what happened anyhoo and thn the whole stand-off between Andy, Adam and Izzy like tht shit was cray cray, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

ya know you totally scared me by making me think that they actually broke up O_o she and bri are so cute together- when they're not fighting that is..
gontier changing his mind about the deal with biersack was good!
and zacky getting to kill andy for killing jinxx was awesome.. just wish he'd tortured the idiot some before shooting him

okay now with gontier on their side- well I hope he is- and his allies- whoever they might be.. I hope they finally get to kill that damn night who seem to have more lives than a frickin' cat.. they need to cut his head off to be sure that he's acutally dead the next time.. and then burn his body.. moahahah.. or maybe night is a twin.. or thriplet(or whatever it's called) now that would be freaky.. hahah

Damn it my heart went to my neck with Brian and Izzy!!!!!!!!!!!!! And then with Andy, Adam and Izzy!!!!!!!!!!! Pfffiuuuu... Zacky got his revenge, Brian and Izzy still together :) Night you're going down!!!!!

Oh damn I hope Adam isn't trying to get them up and when they get to New York he's going to be there with Biersack and Skanky Annie :-(

I hope that Zacky can get a little vengeance - pun intended :-)

Damn that sex scene was hot hot hot.

Amazing update!! Loved the sex scene, it was super hot and I love the way you transition things. The new York encounter should make for interesting events! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Woo that sex scene was hot! It kind of made me think that like....that's how she wants Gates to be with her sexually because she liked that dominant aspect when she was with Vengeance. I still love this story so much and can't wait for more.

Seriously Pree! I love this so friggin much. Your writing is always so flawless! I felt for vengeance in this! It's weird, but I feel myself shifting towards vengeance again. He needs someone to love him! he is so miserable and alone! And poor Johnny too:( I want to give him a hug! That dream was hot too! Why can't I dream like that? Grrr. Lol. Can't wait to see what happens in new York! I hope you Update soon:)

Poor Zacky I want to give him a hug even tho he can be a jackass sometimes but he lost his best friend he needs a sense of comfort so yeah now to Brian and Izzy I think tht Brian is hardheaded for not wanting to listen to Izzy on y she was leaving Zacky's room and I don't like it tht they argue a lot I mean they r meant to be happy but since Jinxx's death it just went downhill and I'm sad but tht sex scene was fucking hot tht I think tht they should just talk shit out and thn have crazy gorilla sex and focus on taking out those bastards from the equation I'm just saying and what is the fucking deal with this bullshit invitation, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Poor Zacky..he might be a jerk in this but he lost his best friend..
I can only imagine what Adam has in store for this meeting..

The first four paragraphs
I want to give him a big hug. Yes, he has a tough guy exterior, with a bad attitude, but he's hurting. He lost his best friend poor guy. I think I'm Vengeance's only fan so I will continue to raise his flag! XD

I don't know who I want her to be with, I'm torn between the chemistry that she has with Vengeance and the love between her and Gates. Gah!

Okay, maybe I'm back on team Gates because holy shit! That dream was beyond smoking hot! I love it when he gets all dominant.
Yes, I am most definitely firmly on Team Gates! Vengeance can go find some floozy to have his way with haha.

Dun dun dun! What's Adam's deal? Can't wait to find out! More I need moreee! xD
Awesome update!

okay well i almost wanted to hug vengeance in the beginning of this chapter, just almost jimmy kinda took that hug away though. hahah

ooh now that was one hot dream!!
aaweh they're falling apart? *pouts* they used to be so cute together but.. hmm..

gontier invited them all to New York? damn i don't like the sound of that O_o

Ohhhh Brian don't let her go :( and Zacky, maybe this way he's gonna stop doing that to Izzy, and that dream was hot :P Adam, I don't think he's gonna celebrate.