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  • Leaving Memories

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    I just want to hold Zacky close and let him cry.

    Brian's an ass. Why you make everyone an ass? I love it!

    Adam... Adam Adam Adam... He's going to kill Izzy, isn't he

    Update soon, lovely!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 06:05am
  • gothique4

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    Oh man I just caught up and poor Jinxx :-( I was hoping that Zacky would be able to get to him before Andy killed him :-(

    Damn, now Brian's pissed because Izzy was in Vengeance's room but I hope he doesn't go flying off the handle and lets her explain that she was just talking to him.

    It certainly sounds like Adam, Annie the skank and Andy are working together but I'm not a hundred percent sure that Adam's not playing the other two.

    Can't wait to read more
    June 16th, 2013 at 03:29am
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    Ahh! I'm gone for a few weeks, come back, read the few updates and it's this! I mean I saw it coming but gah! You can't leave me hanging! Not like this! I need to know what happens! Then poor Zacky, I love him, but I agree with Izzy. He also had no right to do what he's doing to her. Then Brian and Izzy and whats gonna happen in the next chapter?! Gah! I'm so excited for the next chapter. Update, lovely, please?
    June 15th, 2013 at 04:52am
  • MoMo_92

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    Izzy ur concern for Zacky should have been non invoid it was purposeless like let him handle his own feelings especially the fact tht u and him got some kind of history u should have left him alone and doesn't help tht Brian just seen u come out of the Zacky's room so u better just tell him tht u was checking up on him, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 12th, 2013 at 07:48pm
  • HanerJoy

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    Uuuhhhhh I hope he doesn't get mad :( and Izzy the concern you had for Vengeance was sweet but, next time don't let that happen.
    June 12th, 2013 at 02:46am
  • heretic.

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    Uh oh, cat's out of the bag! Even though I know Izzy and Gates belong together, I just love it when Vengeance pounces on her like that! He gets my motor running in the most wonderful way! xD
    More soon :D
    June 10th, 2013 at 02:39pm
  • mollymoshpit;

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    Oh snap! Gates is catching on to her. Gosh damn Izzy, as if one isn't enough! You can't keep doing this to Gates. He deserves you to be faithful to him. I hope she knows he going to have a cow and then kick some ass
    June 10th, 2013 at 12:54pm
  • Moriarty;

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    Izzy you fool! You had Gates why on earth would you want to be with Vengeance? Go and be good and faithful with him rather than letting Zacky take over you like this. You're an idiot- you better hope Gates forgives you!
    June 10th, 2013 at 11:26am
  • helena_88

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    shadows.. that was a blow under the belt.. sure she and vengeance has that weird history but still.. damn he needs to get laid or something.. hahahah.. but still, can't be easy on him when almost everyone he thought was on their side now seem to have turned their backs on him and the rest of them.. Sad

    izzy izzy izzy.. such a fool when it comes to the prick.. Mr. Green and yes i mean vengeance.. heheheh.. i think the last thin shred of humanity that he had got lost when jinxx died.. well ok, maybe a teeny tiny bit is still there, buried seriously deep since he actually let her go..

    ooh.. bri.. yeah.. what's she gonna tell him?? Mr. Green
    June 10th, 2013 at 10:48am
  • shortygirl

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    Oh shit! She fought back this time though..Brian isn't gonna be happy either way.
    June 10th, 2013 at 06:31am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Wow. What an epic update! Vengeance sneaking around trying to get Izzy, and her responding to him! I mean, I don't blame her lol. But vengeance actually crying? I loved the show of emotion that didn't involve violence or selfishness. I'm super excited for the next update.

    Also, my condolences for your loss :( I hope you're able to have the strength to celebrate your aunts life.
    June 9th, 2013 at 04:48am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I just caught up on this story and holy shit woman! There are so many twists! I love it!! Poor manipulative Vengeance,I guess even he has a heart thatcan be broken:( poorJinxx. Can't wait to find out what's next! And what the hell is with izzy? She almost fell for Vengeances sneaky ways!! Grrr, lol. I dont want her to hurt gates! I hope life is starting to brighten up foryou aGain. Stay strong:)
    June 6th, 2013 at 12:38am
  • mollymoshpit;

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    Andy is a dick and I actually feel pretty bad for sacks. Hope everything might lift up soon but I live this anyways. Update soon please
    June 4th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • HanerJoy

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    Nooooo why Jinxx :( poor Zacky :( even tho' he's an asshole he's hurting a lot :( and I really thought he was gonna kill Mandi lol Update soon please!!!!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 11:39pm
  • Moriarty;

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    NO WHY DID JINXX HAVE TO DIE?
    Zacky come here and let me hug you my baby, don't be sad- we're all gonna make it okay! There was all that sexy time between Mandi and Zee and then BAM you throw that drama bombshell right in my face! All this drama is messing with my feels in the best way possible! More soon please :)
    June 3rd, 2013 at 05:52pm
  • heretic.

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    Big hugs, I hope tomorrow goes as well as it can do for you and your family :)

    Oh man! The way you write Vengeance just has me in a puddle on the floor! He is pure sex in this!
    Tears in my eyes! Poor Zee Zee! Poor Jinxx! :(
    You'd better run Andy, Vengeance will have your head on a spike File
    Awesome update! More soon :D
    June 3rd, 2013 at 01:27pm
  • helena_88

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    aaah nooo you killed jinxx Sad and now they def. know that andy isn't on their side- killing one of his own.. douche!! and zee! i do not like him one bit, still after izzy and stuff but it was still sooooo sad when he realized that his friend didn't make it..

    i guess that means that the last little bit of humanity in him will be long gone?? O_o

    *hugs*
    June 3rd, 2013 at 10:25am
  • MoMo_92

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    Poor Zacky he lost his only friend :( thts so sad I didn't want Jinxx to die fucking Andy can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 3rd, 2013 at 07:52am
  • MusicFan

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    I hope everything goes well and things start looking up for you. Cant wait for the next update!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 05:24am
  • CountSynula

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    That chapter was amazing woman! Woooo so hot...the scene with Vengeance was yummy! You don't suck at smut! Not even close. Good luck with everything tomorrow and I shall keep you in my thoughts! I hope things start looking up for you soon. Smile
    June 3rd, 2013 at 04:00am