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  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    Bu bu but but what about Jalex... :'(
    May 14th, 2013 at 06:29am
  • m0riarty

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    sadness.
    complete sadness.
    May 8th, 2013 at 05:04pm
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    NO ALEX YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE YOU MADE THE WRONG DECISION! If I were Jack I wouldn't forgive you and stay your friend after let alone best friend! Friends don't betray their friends especially your freaking boyfriend!
    Anywhore as I was typing my little rant Never Enough by AVP started playing and I was like 'hey this song kinda fits with it' I should probably go to bed now :3
    May 8th, 2013 at 08:16am
  • MortRainey.

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    Oh. I think my heart just broke for Jack.
    Not good.
    May 7th, 2013 at 10:06am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    What NOOO my poor Jacky </3 ima punch Alex in the face!
    May 7th, 2013 at 08:19am
  • stillydg'n

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    @ m0riarty
    aww, thank you! sorry, ive only been able to update when i get time on a computer, currently in the middle of moving :s but im hoping to have the next update up by tomorrow night!
    May 7th, 2013 at 06:13am
  • m0riarty

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    i hope you will start updating faster because i love this story but it's hard to stick with it when you don't update often and you always leave us wanting to know what happens next for a long time
    May 7th, 2013 at 06:09am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK ALEX!! YOU CAN'T BE DOIN THIS TO JACK!!!!!
    April 29th, 2013 at 04:49am
  • m0riarty

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    what the fucking fuck Alex you motherfucking fucker don't fucking go on that motherfucking date or i will fucking kill you. fuck.
    April 29th, 2013 at 01:13am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    Oh shit man don't go Lex!

    I feel as if something bad is gonna happen...
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:49am
  • m0riarty

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    if tay tries anything i'll break her face
    April 21st, 2013 at 11:28pm
  • pshhitshannah

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    WHY DOES SHE WANT TO SEE HIM?!? DON'T GO MAN DON'T GO!
    April 21st, 2013 at 10:04pm
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    Yumm pizza for breakfast :3
    April 2nd, 2013 at 03:11am
  • stillydg'n

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    @Butthead Thank you! Didn't even realize that, just fixed it!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 02:21am
  • lame sauce

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    This is much better and easier to read, just watch out for unintentional point of view change. You kind of out of nowhere went from first person to third person. That can be a little confusing.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 02:14am
  • stillydg'n

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    thank you all! Ahah, I felt a bit weird writing this chapter it was all very new to me to write something like this. Actually, this is the first time ive ever written something like this, so thank you! @ JalexIsMyLife @ m0riarty @ Butthead;
    March 30th, 2013 at 01:48am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    ASDFGHJKL YOUR SUCH A FUCKING TEASE!!!
    March 30th, 2013 at 12:13am
  • m0riarty

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    ABSOLUTELY lovely. I loved the teasing omfg, that's like my favorite thing to write and read about. this was fab. I can't wait for the next update
    March 29th, 2013 at 04:22pm
  • lame sauce

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    Lovely, lovely. I'm excited for more
    March 29th, 2013 at 09:57am
  • stillydg'n

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    @ Butthead;
    thank you! I really appreciate it!
    March 29th, 2013 at 07:34am
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