Won't You Take Me Home? - Comments

This is honestly, and I don't use this loosely, a fantasticly written story. You should just watch out for your formatting. Some dick might report you becasue your paragraghing, or lack there of, becomes confusing to read. Keep it up, though.

This is honestly, and I don't use this loosely, a fantasticly written story. You should just watch out for your formatting. Some dick might report you becasue your paragraghing, or lack there of, becomes confusing to read. Keep it up, though.

@ JalexIsMyLife
Ahah stay tuned!

Why can't the just be a couple already?!

WOOOOOOOOO YAY JALEX

thank you! Its being posted in just a bit!

this was a really good chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

yeah, it was a bit hard trying to figure out a reason for Alex to have needed to go to the hospital and I figured it was an already existing problem in the plot so.. ahah, thanks for the feedback!

That sounds like one hell of a panic attack if the hospital wanted to keep him there... Hopefully Alex tells him how he really feels about Jack :3

WHATTHE ACTUALFUCK HAPPENED TO ALEX?!?!? I hope hes okay </3 you have to fix them :'(

WHAT HAPPENED TO ALEX?!?

@ stillydg'n
Yay can't wait!

I was actually planning on it being from Jacks!

NOOO ALEX! :'( maybe Rian will tell Jack what Alex said just before he blacked out... Or can the next chapter be from Jack's POV or Rian's? :)

In my opinion the kiss should have happened in the bed and it should have gotten really heated ;) Anywhore update soon please!!! :D

That really sucks... Good luck on the rewrite :D

I am so sorry! My laptop froze and shut off! I didn't get a chance to save it as a draft like I do with all of my chapters! So, sadly, I must rewrite the entire chapter.

whaa I just saw the next chapter then it disappeared

ahaa, stay tuned for the next chapter.. who knows?(;

Whaa no kiss?? :( They should have kissed ;)