The writing in this is very well written and descriptive. I liked the idea of her being a city girl and coming to the country. The farmhand's attitude with her was cute, especially the way he called her doll face.
"If ya’ keep gawking at me like that Doll face I might just steal a kiss."
This line was extremely cute to me!
The tone of the story matched the picture's nicely and I liked this story so far. The mystery of what had happened to her sister and if her killer will find Audrey had me wondering more. Overall, this was very excellent.
Thank you for entering this into my contest and you'll find out later today if you won!
The writing in this is very well written and descriptive. I liked the idea of her being a city girl and coming to the country. The farmhand's attitude with her was cute, especially the way he called her doll face.
"If ya’ keep gawking at me like that Doll face I might just steal a kiss."
This line was extremely cute to me!
The tone of the story matched the picture's nicely and I liked this story so far. The mystery of what had happened to her sister and if her killer will find Audrey had me wondering more. Overall, this was very excellent.
Thank you for entering this into my contest and you'll find out later today if you won!