Heaven/Hell - Comments

ooolala Demetria and Silva ;)
ROBIN THICKE OH GOSH

I LOVE BLURRED LINES LMAO
IT'S SO ADDICTIVE AND CATCHY
oooooooh Silva
girl, is Demetria gon' be in a ~~love~~ triange? ;)))))

I hate Arrow UGH
WHAT A DICK
he has absolutely no right to do this
and damn I'm a lil terrified of Silva nbd
and d'aw Caelum you savior c:

This is amazing!!

This would be such an awesome movie!

I hope that they fight back, I really do. They're a planet of warriors (at least t seems this way) so I truly hope they can come together and fight for their planet.

As always Raveena, you've done a wonderful job and I'm very proud of you! Keep up the amazing work.

wow Calum is wow.
WOW
UGH HUMANS
why?! lol
dang

JESUS
DOES DR. ARROW THINK HE'S A GENIUS?
because he really isn't
this is so much bigger than him and he should know better than to meddle in such affairs that are greater than him
I HOPE THEY FIGHT BACK
AND I HOPE THEY WIN
THIS STORY IS SO FABULOUS
I LOVE THIS
AND YOU

I think you're great with details, don't doubt that. Also, I have to say that I like this so far. I love sci-fi (though you know that) and I am loving this.

I like that we get the basis for this story. We have an idea what it's leading up to, but knowing you, there will be twists and turns to come. I can't wait for more chapters when we can dive deeper into the story.

I have to say, Raveena (and I know I may say this a lot) but I have a feeling that this just may be my favorite story of yours. The writing is different and I can tell how much you've improved over just a few years. This story seems rather professional, actually.

Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter.

loving this (:

now this is fabulous

Planet X is better than Earth?! Oh lawwd that must be amazing to see
Whoa....
this is so interesting
I don't know how much I can love this
BUT it's a lot of love <3
The Iridems sound so cool
They play soccer ! (:
Caelum, I can't wait to read more about him
I loved it!

aw shit girl
Silva u a nasty lil' mofo
I hope you aren't always like that
Caelum, ily
you're perfect
RAVEENA THIS IS INCREDIBLE OKAY

this excites me greatly and i am quite pleased.
continue please and thank you xo

omfg this is freakin brilliant !
I need more haha
Not a normal thing I'd read, but you made this sound so alluring :)

I love this!! It's so unique!!! :D

omigosh um what
this is beautiful

THIS IDEA IS SO AWESOME. Sci-fi stories are so cool because the stuff that authors come up with is just mind-blowing and creative. YOUR WRITING AND THIS STORY IS MIND-BLOWING AND CREATIVE. And super-duper original. I LOVE IT.

Update aoon!

You need to write this. Seriously, you need to write this.