I like the idea but i don't like at all how you did the same chapters just in other peoples point of view or 3rd person revolving around someone. it was frusterating and the story goes nowhere doing that, keep it to first person or 3rd person and dont just keep writing the same thing over and over just from someone elses point of view. its annoying as fuck
August 28th, 2013 at 07:46am
