Lost in London - Comments

@ Penguin_Ninja
Aww, me too! I forget sometimes how rough this story was.

I just re-read this and it still makes me cry... so much...

@ Sailorroxy
"And now I see, I see it for the first time, there is no crime in being kind. Not everyone is out to screw you over. Maybe, oh just maybe they just wanna get to know ya. Now the time is here, baby you don't have to live your life in fear and the sky is clear, is clear of fear. Don't wanna live in fear and loathing. I wanna feel like I am floating instead of constantly exploding in fear and loathing."

I definitely see it.

The song Fear and Loathing by Marina and The Diamonds makes me think of Reilly to.

@ kind of perfect

@ Sailorroxy
Yes yes yes to all of it. I listened to Isabella and for me that one is Harry and Reilly. Their friendship is so important to me. I mean, all the boys are there for her always. But Harry, specifically, is so gentle with saying the really hard things to her, the things that no one else wants to say. And he makes a point of reminding her that she's better than the way her family treats her. You're really on point with these songs! I love it.

I listened to the Dia Frampton song and really liked it then went and reread this story and was like wow "Daniel" really fits this story. Then as I continued. To read I started to think of Wanted by Hunter Hayes and was like this is so Niall. Dia has a song called Isabella that makes me think of One Direction/ Reilly.

@ Sailorroxy
Oh my goodness. I just listened to both these songs because I'd never heard either of them before and they are SO perfect. Like, the Hunter Hayes one is totally Niall and the Dia Frampton one is Reilly and I can't believe it. Thank you!

And Wanted by Hunter Hayes makes me think of Niall in this story.

A song that makes me think of this story and the sequel is Daniel by Dia Frampton
I've heard a cover by a youtuber called argusfilik? You should listen to it!

gonna go cry into oblivion now. seriously want to be mad but i can't because there is a sequel haha. so i'm going to go read that now! (:

@ Broken-hearT
My feelings aren't hurt at all. In fact, I think this is excellent feedback. Thank you. I totally understand your frustration with Reilly's lack of explanation. I did that for a reason. People who are as scared as Reilly is don't know how to put it into words. It wasn't just Niall she didn't explain it to. Lexie knew, but only because she knows Reilly's entire story. Harry knows to a point, and that's because he learned how to read Reilly in a way that no one else did.

There's a reason this is a two-part story, though. Keep in mind that this story only took place over the course of about two and a half months (though it took me, what, the better part of eight months to write?). There's so much still left to happen for Reilly and Niall. I'm a little sad that you've already decided not to even give the second part a chance. That's your decision though. I just hope you'll keep in mind that it will be there if you change your mind.

Honestly I think you write very well. But I believe the way you ended that you don't care about your character at all. It was all a bunch of redundancy. With her not being with Niall but wanting to be. Constant heartache. At the very least she could of told him she was scared or why she couldn't be with him. I was hoping you were going to make it a happy ending. I know they aren't reality. Not everyone can have one. But if you would have let her explain why to Niall I believe it would have been a better story. For that reason I didn't like it. It wouldn't of mattered if it was a happy ending. Or that you will have a sequel. I won't read it because I believe you will continue to make your character suffer without explanations. That little fact would of made me want to read more of your stories, that he at least had a reason she kept breaking his heart and torturing herself. I'm sorry if this hurt your feeling or anything. I believe you are an excellent writer and story teller.

Awesome update, very sad though! :( Hoping for a sequel! :)

i'm so scared because i know what i want to happen but i have a feeling it will be the opposite so i'm just not going to predict anything and wait to be surprised. anxiously awaiting! (:

ugh please please please update this? i love it so much and i don't think i can stand to see it on this cliffhanger. it's so good. but i totes know how it goes to get attached to your characters, believe me i've done it before too, it sucks to let them go, so take your time, just know that i'll be dying in the mean time until this is updated. (:

Hope you update soon

I would love to be the one that bugs you consistently but I would probably forget to continue bugging you. I'm a very forgetful person when necessary

cant wait !!!!!

@ liontaming
I had forgotten about "The Reilly List"! I had to go back and skim through the story to see what you were talking about.

"The Reilly List", now that got me. Please update soon, I'm really enjoying it. :)