I can't understand why you don't have more comments on this!! I read it from start to finish tonight and I have to say, when it started off I was kinda thinking "oh God, this story line is gonna be terrible" but I was actually quite pleased with where you went with it. It wasn't predictable. And you kept it light but you also have these really sad moments. I love the friendship you've written between Reily and Lou and Reily and Liam and Reily and Harry. And I love how Reily has brief moments of letting herself go before she realises what she's doing with Niall. It's real. Cause no one would be so closed off about an idea and just give in the first chance they got. Which is why I like what you have, it's not so "today I met One Direction and we became the best of friends straight away and I'm already Niall's girlfriend and we're getting married and having babies" haha. Can't wait to see where this goes. Hopefully updates aren't few and far in between! :)
May 4th, 2013 at 01:30pm