A Love Worth Fighting For - Comments

@ RosaliaBraginski
its fine

@ IceCoolFashion
Might not be done until tomorrow sowwy

@ RosaliaBraginski
AWESOME!

@ IceCoolFashion
Yeah it will I'm working on the next chapter now.

YAY! Im excited its going to continue!!!

@ RosaliaBraginski
LOL! I CANT WAIT! :)

@ IceCoolFashion
Thanks and yeah lol I can tell you without spoiling it that Andy and Ashley don't like the idea.

im sorry i havent been on mibba in foreva! i know what you mean, my writing style changes all the time for me, but thats just us trying new things or exspiramenting. i like some of things you mentioned about record companys because i didnt know most of that. I think it was a pretty good idea to skip 2 years, and i cant wait for the next chapter!
p.s. i wonder how andy and ashley are going to take the news that jasten might want to be touring the world without them :)

@ lolbrittany
Thank you so much.

No offense taken! I can give you some tips that you will probably understand, after class is over tonight.

@ lolbrittany
Yes I did ask for opinions and I like it when people are truthful with me. I may have made a blunder by being mean with you and I'm sorry if I offended you. If it is alright may I please ask you for tips on how to write better?

@ RosaliaBraginski
You realize that you asked for opinions, right? I gave you mine. Do not use limited vocabulary to insult me and my opinions. I never said you couldn't write. I told you what I thought. I never said you weren't trying your best; that's how you interpreted it and that isn't my fault. If you're going to be a writer, you need to learn to accept criticism because not everyone is going to like what you write, how you write, and why you write it regardless of your ADHD.

@ lolbrittany
Sorry to burst your bubble but, I'm in high school okay I'm sorry that my writing doesn't stand up to your fucking college standards but, you see I was trying something different. Everyone has a writing style and mine changes very often because of my severe ADHD this is the farthest I've ever gotten in a story and it's people like you that make me think I can't write. Yes I fill up space because, I can't concentrate long enough to write a long ass chapter that most people want. I'm glad that you were honest but, you know I've explained it in a previous chapter that I'm only fifteen. I'm used to writing poems and songs. I'm trying my best here and if that's not good enough for you then good riddance.

No offense or anything, but I don't like the new writing style. It's really short and just not the kind of style that this story needs. Plus, you put a bunch of fluff that's not necessary in your writing, like listing out all of those bands and explaining what Fearless Records is. I mean, people can look that stuff up on their own. It's not necessary to take up a whole paragraph and create an allusion that a chapter is longer than it really is. This story, as a writer in college myself, just isn't well written or have a good, concrete mood/flow. In short, I'm unsubscribing and not recommending it anymore. Good luck.

@ RosaliaBraginski
okay :)

@ IceCoolFashion
Expect it in three to five days lol because I have to work out the kinks

@ RosaliaBraginski
glad i could help! i cant wait for the next update! :)

@ IceCoolFashion
Okay that is an amazing idea and I'm glad you love it.

@ RosaliaBraginski
i love it, i think that would make alot of sense, considering that jasten isnt a member of bvb yet he loves singing and writing songs. I know this is not any of my business, but what if the new band jasten is in, one of the members has a crush on him, which makes ashley and espicailly andy jealous. But i still love that idea you have!

@ RosaliaBraginski
i love it, i think that would make alot of sense, considering that jasten isnt a member of bvb yet he loves singing and writing songs. I know this is not any of my business, but what if the new band jasten is in, one of the members has a crush on him, which makes ashley and espicailly andy jealous. But i still love that idea you have!