@ IceCoolFashion Okay so I skip two years ahead when BVB is on tour and Jasten gets signed by a different record label to a band called The Secret Ones as the lead singer and they go on tour seprate from BVB's and it puts a huge strain on their relationship.
@ IceCoolFashion OMG!!!!! Thanks and @lolbrittany the only reason the P.O.V. things are basically the same thing is because where I'm from in school we're taught that every person has a different prespective of the story that they are in and about how each thing goes down. And everyone deserves a turn to tell their side of things. I'm sorry that my writing style bores you but, its your loss because I'm very proud that I have even gotten this far with this story. My ADHD is an obsticle that I've had to face my entire life and because of it everything I really wanna do and that I start I never end up finishing it.
OMG I HAVE THE SAME PROBLEM AS YOU! i'm 14 and i play electric guitar, but i live in michigan, so there are no other people around where i live that like rock music either! I also write songs and sing a little bit. :D oh and one more thing, i sorta disagree with lilbrittany, i think the time-skips actually help make each chapter cut to the chase, and the povs and everything are perfect in my oppinion. yes, the story was getting boring, but adding bret into the mix really helped up the plot of the story. Keep on writing, and remember it only matters if you're proud of the story, the opinion of others doesnt matter. :)
Okay so I skip two years ahead when BVB is on tour and Jasten gets signed by a different record label to a band called The Secret Ones as the lead singer and they go on tour seprate from BVB's and it puts a huge strain on their relationship.