Righting Wrongs - Comments

I love the way you write. I'm so jealous of your talent - omg

I'll start by saying I love that this is so much different from other incest stories. It seems much more realistic. Rather than brother and sister, they're cousins who were also childhood friends. And they realize that it's wrong, and her brothers are suspicious. That all contributes to that, making it seem more realistic.

Her personality is great. Adorable. And, though he does bad things, I still like Andy a lot. I don't know if I'm supposed to dislike him, but I do like him as a character. You develop them really well and give them lots of depth, making them almost seem real to the reader.

Your writing style is amazing and so is this story!

This story is so good. You make the incest into more of a realilstic thing, since Andy and Emily are cousins. Maybe it's creepy, but I love the fact that he's so in love with her, and she likes him too but is too scared to admit it. I also think that her brothers getting suspicious adds to the effect. Please please please update soon.

Ah, yes, that's much better, thank you. Sorry to bother you with it. I just... Yeah. But thank you, that helped a lot.

(Oh, and the first one I think was more grey- or a very light beige/peach maybe...- but the most distinct thing I remember about it was the banner had the would be Andy and Emily models embracing while laying on a couch together- very scantily clad in their undies, I believe.)

@ addesin
ahh, I'm sorry. I don't remember what the first one exactly looked like, but I just changed it a bit. Is the current one somewhat alright now?

Do what you feel you need to do. It's your story after all. Personally, I think you're doing brilliant as is but if you want to play with it, I wouldn't be hurt.

Can I just say that... um, this new layout gives me a headache? Er... Yeah... I just... I liked the old one (the very first one) the best and I miss it and his one is just... ouch. My eyes...

But as far as content, it's perfect as is. But if you want to play with it, by all means, do what you have to do. I'll still be a faithful reader til the end on the default layout.

Whatever you decide is totally fine. I love the way the story is going now, but ultimately you're the author and the story is great. A little revamping on your part is okay and I'm sure if you did that, all of your subscribers would stay faithful. Although, I'm dying for an update so I hope you make your decision soon! :)

i don't mind! whatever decision you make, i will be fine with

Keep going!

Keep going

Keep going

Well you know that this is my favorite story, so it would be hard for me to see it get deleted, but I know where you're coming from. I've been there before. I think every Author on this website has had it happen multiple times, so if you want to restart, then I would be perfectly okay with it. I mean like you said, you're just changing a few things. As long you don't give up on this completely, then I'm okay with it. You're a great writer, so please don't ever stop writing.

I don't mind you going over this story again. I would be a little upset but I know how it feels when the story seems a little... slow?

I don't see anything wrong with the story right now (maybe I didn't pay attention) but it's your choice.

This is just getting better and better! You're story makes my heart pound, and I can't wait for more :)

Aw, that was perfect<3

OMG. I'm waiting anxiously ;(

OMG. I'm waiting anxiously ;(

Ludicrous, I'm telling you. You deserve more than that. But a 100 subs is better than none.

I'm glad that you updated again. I was so worried that I won't be able to read another beautiful and dark chapter of yours. Chapter nine's first part was a cliffhanger to me and I was wanting more. But you left me hanging and I couldn't wait for what would happen next.

I don't know when you will update, hopefully this comment will give you some inspiration or something but I hope we'll get into the romance already of Andy and Emily. I know that it's wrong but I love both of them and I ship them both!

Only 100 subs? Only 17 comments? Only 14 recs? That's ridiculous! You should have so much more! I don't know, honestly, why I should like this story, but I've always had a thing for incest stories.. go figure and I really like this one... a lot. You're a brilliant writer, too! The way you express Emily's emotions is great. I loved this chapter, because I really thought Emily was going to say she needed Andy, but I loved how you just ripped it from us. Ah, this story is amazing. <3 Please don't doubt yourself, because I love it! <3

Another amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :)