A World Corrupt - Comments

@ LOVE1516
No problem! Can't wait for the next update!

Sorry, I re-did that part, sometimes I write to fast and forget words and when I go over it I still miss things, thanks for letting me know!

This is really good!
But what did you mean by this line: “Katrina needs to hurry up, stop fighting! You’re not getting up until you calm down.” Lucas snaps at me, what’s Katrina have to do with all of this?
Thanks, and I can't wait for the next update!

I like this story, but it's hard to read with the conversations all mushed together, you know? I think it has a lot of potential if it was edited :]

Love it! It's sad that 1/2 the children had to be sold, but at least Willow is looking out for them.

Glad you like it:)

Glad you like it:)

I can't believe Willow is a witch! That is an interesting twist... now Lucas should fear her, since she has the power to kill him.
I wonder how powerful Willow and who her biological Mom and Dad are....
Can't wait to read more!

Amazing! I wonder what Lucas saw that made him super shocked.... can't wait to find out!
Please update soon!

Gahhhh!! I just can't get enough of this story!

Thanks! I was going to make it a normal love story but, i decided to change it up:) Happy that you like it!

I can't believe Lucus is so cold hearted that he would kill an innocent 2 year old. And what is with the room full of kids! Lucas is way meaner than I thought..(I love where the story is going though)
Super happy you updated! Please update soon!

This is amazing! Please update soon!!

I'm loving this story so far! I wonder what Willow has in store for Lucas. Can't wait too see where this story will go from here. Update soon!