Oh my God this was so cute I want to die!!!! Tyler is seriously so sweet, I love how he is thinking of Mel at times when he probably wouldn't care. I just love this so much!!
Awwww!!! Their text messages were freaking adorable!!!!! I knew the drinking was going to lead down a dark road but I'm so glad Tyler realized what he was doing! What a sweetie!!!! I'm so glad you updated, it was a great one!! <3
Oh my Lord. This chapter was absolutely flawless. Tyler is so sweet and Mel is adorable but I like how she's staying grounded even though he basically swept her off her feet :P And their kiss was PERFECT. SO CUTE <3 I love this story, and your writing, and you for writing it!
Awww!! I don't care that it was short I'm so glad you updated, I missed this!!! I am dying over this right now lol that was so adorable!! I love how comfortable they already are with each other and I'm hoping it makes for many more cute moments down the road :D
Oh my God I am dying to learn about Mel's life.. this must be how Tyler feels haha! I can't wait for the rest of the date. And what are you talking about this not being your best writing, this was great! better than anything I could have done!!!
Aww I'm so in love with the two of them!!! I really like how humble she makes him, it's absolutely adorable. And not every update is gonna be amazing, but this one was great because it left me just wanting to know more about what he has planned and the back story behind her god daughter!! I think you're doing a fantastic job :D again, your writing style is so smooth and flowing, makes it even more enjoyable to read! Can't wait for the next one!
First off, don't worry about the nicknames or what have you! It's your story, whatever you choose to call them is what it's gonna be :) and I'm seriously in love with this story. I can't wait for their date! <3