OMG! HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS?! Girl, this story is amazing. You are an incredible writer!!!!!!!!!! I love everything about this!!! I literally can't praise it enough. <3
You should be receiving a lot more comments on this story- it's great! You've done a great job with the dialogue and I love how you switch POVs but it's not confusing to follow. Keep up the great writing-can't wait to see what happens next!