Feelings - Comments

Wow, this is really amazing. Very unique, I can't say that I've read anything like this that has actually personified feelings. It's really amazing, I loved it. It really makes you think about how your feelings are involved with one another, how one fuels the other, or accompanies it.

I checked the sequel before the prequel but since the both of them are seperate one-shots, it was no problem. You did a great job in writing this one as well. The emotions you made me feel while reading this tale of yours were so real that a smile made its way to my face when Jealousy gave him her hand. Write more like these, please.

I checked the sequel before the prequel but since the both of them are seperate one-shots, it was no problem. You did a great job in writing this one as well. The emotions you made me feel while reading this tale of yours were so real that a smile made its way to my face when Jealousy gave him her hand. Write more like these, please.

Can I say that I am left speechless? That was absolutely amazing. Your idea was perfect, I would have never thought of something like this. You did an amazing job with the characters, the scene before our eyes, the banner...everything was so eye-catching. I really loved this. <333

I am in love with this great piece of literature. It's melodic and almost poetic. Jealousy and Selfness, I liked how you described them as people and the imagery was great. The banner is absolutely amazing and it fits the story perfectly. The scene you portrayed with the Jealousy not accepting his hand was mesmerizing. That is by far one of the best stories on here. Well done. You did a great job girl.

I am in love with this great piece of literature. It's melodic and almost poetic. Jealousy and Selfness, I liked how you described them as people and the imagery was great. The banner is absolutely amazing and it fits the story perfectly. The scene you portrayed with the Jealousy not accepting his hand was mesmerizing. That is by far one of the best stories on here. Well done. You did a great job girl.

I found this a really interesting concept, it was almost like poetry and the idea was really nice, and the description flowed really well too. There are one or two things I'd suggest editing though. First of all, it changed from 'selfishness' to 'selfness' halfway through the story and it was really distracting. It'd also be nice to see more of this, more of what kind of characters they are and if you can expand more on what would happen etc.