Unconditional. - Comments

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I think this is an amazing story. I love the way the story flows and works well. The characters were developed really well, you got a real good sense of who they were. I liked the amount of dialogue and detail, they complimented each other. Keep writing! You are amazing at it the only constructive thing I can give you is shorter paragraphs, some of them were very long.

Look at Seb being a good friend. We all need at least one friend like that. Loved it like always :) can't wait for more ♥

Oh I can't believe Seb had to do that for Josh. But at least it wasn't too bad of a punishment. Nice chapter and long too. :)

I love the past two updates. This story keeps getting more interesting and intriguing. Can't wait for more.

Omg, Why didn't I notice you've updated twice? I feel bad now for not reading sooner. I loved them both as always and I'm pretty excited to see how this all turns out

Loving the new layout :) and loved this chapter. Always good to have a bit of drama and end it on a cliff hanger. Can't wait to read the next chapter :)

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I really liked this story. It was really easy to follow, and REALLY well written. There was a lot of description, which is always awesome. I really like the character josh. I don't know what it is, but I really like him. Really nice job

I love this chapter and the new layout is nice and easy to read. Trouble is just following Josh now isn't it.

@ Ritalincola168
Thank you c:

This is a great story. Glad comment swap brought me here.

@ Frozen December Moon
Thank you so much! I'll check your story out later.

I came across this story from comment swap and I have to say I love it. I like the flow, I haven't seen any mistakes, and I like the overall story. I like that you have gone non-linear because you can tell when things are changing and when it's a different part. I'm gonna subscribe and recommend this because it's really good.

@ ninahx
aw, thank you c:

I just found this story and it's really good!

@ PierceTheVeil_BVB
Aw thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I saw your tweet and it made me smile c: Thanks bby.

Oh man, you should see how excited I get when I see you've updated. I love this story so much and yet again that was another perfect chapter :)

Loved it yet again :) can't wait for more :)

@ asdfghjkLiv
Thank you so much c:

This is perfect so far omg

@ PierceTheVeil_BVB
ilysm thank you omg.