Unconditional. - Comments, page 3

xOriginal_LoveX (100)

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I loved that chapter so much. Seriously, you're an amazing writer and right at this moment, this is by far one of the best stories I am reading on this site.

April 10th, 2013 at 05:51pm

xOriginal_LoveX (100)

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@ SamsJam
Haha I love all your work :)

April 8th, 2013 at 02:16pm

SamsJam (100)

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@ PierceTheVeil_BVB
Thank you omg. I'm glad you like it c:

April 8th, 2013 at 02:02pm

xOriginal_LoveX (100)

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Stop being an incredible writer, it's not fair :( gimme some of your skills pwease? Loved it by the way :)

April 8th, 2013 at 01:55pm

SamsJam (100)

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Thank you guys so much for your comments! I've taken them all on board and I've spaced out my paragraphs so hopefully it's easier to read. Thanks guys, I'll update ASAP!

April 7th, 2013 at 06:47pm

Writer in the Rye (100)

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You are SO incredibly talented. Ugh. Stop being so perfect at this :) Lol You're such a gifted writer, truly. Your imagery and voice is to perfection and I can't wait to see you success grow. You write with such sheer confidence and that makes this enjoying to read. Adore this story so much :D

April 7th, 2013 at 06:32pm

peach kitten (165)

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The writing in this is wonderful. I want to know more about what he set fire to and more about their relationship. The only thing I have to say is if you space out your paragraphs it makes it easier to read.

April 7th, 2013 at 05:22pm

xOriginal_LoveX (100)

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I'm liking this already, can't wait for more :)

April 7th, 2013 at 05:15pm