The Darker Side of Me - Comments

ooooo haha matt got his ass kick by a 16 year old girl update soon

@ Vixyn Of Syn
Trouble is in store for both of them. Things may or may not turn out good.. you'll have to see!
Thanks for reading!

Those poor sisters! They're good friends to Kat, though. I just hope everything turns out okay for them. I like both of those characters and couldn't stand it if anything more happened to them.

@ January Rose
You're welcome :D

@ NoComparison
Thank-you!

A really touching and poignant look at a sibling relationship.. Well done :)

update please!!!! ;)

She's a bad ass! Loved it!

@ Vixyn Of Syn
I m happy u like it lol

I hate that she's having to leave the only family she really has, but it's for the best. Thank goodness she met Zane! And I know Johnny's going to be surprised when she shows up.

Can't wait to see what happens!

It reads a lot better, it's more informative and slowed, it flows a more smoothly, I like it. :-) keep it up you guys.

@ Star Angel

I think the source of info for her is going to end up being Johnny. Lol. That was my guess.

@ Vixyn Of Syn
What's your source lol would love to hear more

All right! Now we're getting somewhere. :-) I hope she can find out the information she needs...and I know of a source! I'm beginning to see how she and Johnny are going to reunite!

@ ForeverARedHead
Hey I added some info to the first chapter just so u know

@ Star Angel
Sounds good :-) I look forward to reading. Your co writer JanuaryRose asked me to come read and review (she's been doing it a lot for mine and sent me this way, I was happy to oblige.) The writing is good and there's no complaints at all on that because the story so far paints a great picture but just write it out how you see it displaying in your mind, the place and then character. Keep up the writing though it is good.

@ ForeverARedHead
thank you i am slowly going through and adding more details then im going to run it by my co-writer then post ill let you know when i repost the chapters!

I like how it's flowing, you need to add some detail to it to make a clearer picture and to slow down a little, maybe longer chapters :-) but in the retrospect of things it's a really great idea and you guys should def continue, so keep up the good writing and I can't wait to read more!

@ Vixyn Of Syn
I'm happy you like it and that part will become clear soon

I really like the idea behind this! The plot is interesting, and I want to read more. I hope that there might be a bit more flashback from Johnny's side, so that it's more clear why he stayed away (I figure there will be when y'all get to that part). But so far, so good. I'll definitely keep reading! :)