Don't Give Up (On Me) - Comments

OMFG THIS IS SO NICE ,DSFNDSKFJ

*turned it into a story
Baaad english, sorry haha

I'm so glad you turned this to a story! And I like how accurate it sounds, because I don't really know John, but by the lyrics of pioneer and now "happy", you presume that or he is a great song writer or he is fucked up emotionally, that's what I think and it makes me sad that someone so special can feel so depressed. I'm loving you for doing this and for the chapter being long <3

Awwww, I'm so glad you picked this back up and are turning it into a story. That cliff-hanger was pretty amazing I have to admit but I'm happy that you're continuing.
I can't wait to read and see what the rollercoaster has in store for me. :)

Yes! Turn this into a story. I haven't seen anything like this on mibbba and I think it'd be really good.

PLEASE TURN IT INTO A STORY! So well-written. I wonder how they met, why he is taking the anti-depressant pills...

I've been looking for a story like this forever! Please continue on! I have no doubt it will turn out amazing!

I totally think you should turn this into a story.. it sounds great and I would be very interested in reading it :)

I would definitely read if you turned it into a story!

OMG! The ending was so great. If you continue this, I would be so down to read it. I thought it was some cute little one shot then at the end it's like BAM haha :)

Omg this one shot ending is cliffhanger!!! Don't you dare just leave me like thy I want mooooore!!!