Miserable at Best - Comments

Beautifully written, Lizzie. I love to lose myself in your writing. :)

Oh my poor Mikey! *pouts* You know I have a thing for the Frikey. But I know you and know that the Frerard will win out. Not that it's a bad thing, but I already feel sorry for Mikey 'cause he's got it so bad for Frankie and I know he can't win. *sad sigh*

he wanted nothing more than to be left alone to wallow in his self-pity.

Ha, ha. Been there. Done that.

Frank never noticed Mikey.

That's so wrong, it makes me want to cry.

One, for Gerard to be good to Frank. And two, since he knew that Gerard would break his heart, for Frank to be okay. So far neither of those prayers had come true, but Mikey made it his solemn vow to help Frank get back to his former self.

And this is why he deserves to get Frank! To love him but still to pray that Gerard is good for him. To love someone enough to want them to be happy even if it's with someone else, that's just... Wow. I can't actually imagine being that selfless.

''Probably not... I don't know if I'm really up to celebrating Gerard's engagement... I'd feel like I wasn't welcome or something,'' Frank replied, sighing deeply.

Seriously, Gerard?! You break up with Frank to marry her, you break up with him in the horrible, cruel way you did, and then you send him an invitation to your engagement party? WTF?! Gonna rub a little salt in those wounds while you're at it?

Poor Mikey!

I like him better than Gee!!

GO FOR MIKEY, FRANKLES!!

Update Spoon!

I feel bad for Mikey. So horrible... I was still sad... if not sadder after reading this. It was really good, just like everything else.

I'm just going to put this out there. I think Frank was being a total and complete asshole in this part. I understood that he was depressed about the whole Gerard thing, but I still feel he was an ass. I loved it though. It made the story that much more interesting.

The whole love triangle thing made me kind of sad. Mikey loved Frank so much that he out up with Frank's bullshit for a whole month. He even brought him breakfast which I thought was cute. I would love to have Mikey Way bring me breakfast and Starbucks. It made me wonder if Mikey still would've shown up everyday if he didn't love Frank the way he did. I think not, but I'm glad he did.

Then there's the whole engagement party thing. I really can't guess if Frank will go or not. It's so hard for me to say. I love it when things like that happen. I love the suspense. Nothing peeves me more when I read something with a supposed "cliffhanger" and I can already tell what will happen next. I personally find it boring. This was definately not boring. It was nothing short of amazingly spectacularly entertaining.

You should be proud :arms: (more hugs!)

Ans this will be the first time in a week,
That I'll talk to you and I won't speak-
Its been three whole days since I've had sleep,
Because I dream of his lips on your cheek,
And I've got the point that I should leave you alone,
But we both know that I'm not that strong and,
I miss the lips that made me flyyyyyy.

I hate and love that song.

Hate it because it makes me cry,
LOVE it because now I'll think of how amazing you are when I listen to it.

I must apologize x infinity for not reading and commenting earlier about this. I was just really free today, so I started looking through things and I remembered this story and then I read it and here I am now...

I'm sorry for not reading it right away, but thank god I remembered, because it's really good. It made my boring day not so boring anymore.

First off, the picture that you chose for this one-shot made perfect sense in every way. Nice ;)

Also, I wanted to say that I liked how you had the detail of Frank in his same PJs and facial hair, etc, because it shows how much he has let himself go.

There is also a big role that Mikey plays in this story, which I felt was a bit necessary because of how Frank is acting. It was nice to know about Mikey and how he felt about the whole ordeal, and everything he's been going through.

Nice job!!!

Well; first I read "The Best I Ever Had," because I've been meaning to for a while. And... I cried. Then I came and read this... and cried.

The emotion behind this was so heartbreaking; I feel so much for Mikey. He so obviously loves Frank and Frank's just hanging on to a lost cause... but is it really a lost cause? I love how you made everything so unsure; I truly have no idea how Gerard feels truly, which is a good thing.
I have to say though, these were my favorite lines;

"''So... You're not going to come?''

Frank shook his head, and added some Crown to the mix as well. He took a big sip, making an 'ahh' sound when he pulled the glass from his lips, and smirked.

''I guess you'll just have to wait and see...'

Those literally made me shudder! Something tells me Frank is definitely going to want his revenge... I hope you continue this, because it truly is an entrancing saga. There are so many unresolved questions, and I can't wait to find out what happenes between Frank and Mikey; will Mikey tell Frank how he feels? Or will he just hide it?
Oh, how I hope you add another one-shot to this saga...
ily. :arms:

I didn't get the end!

Aww great sequel. i wanna know if he goes or not??

thank you for the comment on my profile.
this is reaaaaaaaally good. :) i like it a lot.
thank you x.

First, thank you for the comment telling me this was up!
I would have never known!
And I really like this, the wrting was perfect.
I can't wait to see what happened after this.
It's going to be interesting to see what Frankie does.
<3

haha! that was great...

go crash the party, Frankie! DO IT! bring a gun, too... just for props...

I was all sad in the beginning, and I freakin' KNEW Mikey loved Frank. As soon as he said he hated Gerard, I had this gut feeling. And I thought 'Shit. Not another broken heart...'

But Frank got better, if only slightly, and it was just plain AMAZING.

Awee.. I think i shed a tear or two.. more soon?

Aw, I liked the Frikeyness.
I hope Gee is really hurt if he and Mikey don't show.
xoxoxoxo

Lizzzzzzzzzzzzy!!
You cannot leave that as a one-shot. No. Fucking. Way.

I'm absolutely freaking out right now. So many unanswered questions!
Does Frank go to the engagement party?
Will he develop feelings for Mikey?
Is Gerard completely over Frank?

Come onnnnnn.
More, I say!
<3333333

That was so sad. Gerard's kind of a dick to actually send an invite to Gerard's wedding

Thats just fucked up actually...

This was really good. Is there going to be another one?

Perhaps one where a certain someone who's name starts with an F realizes feeling for someone who's name starts with an M?

does he go ??????????????????????//btw very well written

wow, just wow...

yet another stunning display of emotions that i can only touch the surface of in my own writing.

i actually love the fact that mikey's in love with frank, there's always some point where you fall in love with your best friend, knowing you can't have them {or you can sometimes} but no matter what you want them to be happy and it's so apparent mikey wants nothing short of utter bliss for frank. for him to even remotely hate his brother for doing what he's done to frank that made my heart melt. he's so willing to cross that blood-is-thicker-than-water line because frank means that much to him.

my heart broke for mikey in this one-shot, it truly did. i've been in his position once before and it sucks like none other. i've watched as one of my best friends went after the girl he liked at the time, encouraging him, wanting him to be nothing but happy...being there for him when they fell apart...but always just the best friend.

i seriously enjoy reading your work, you truly have talent for writing amazing stories. thanks for letting me know you wrote this! =]

IN-FUCKING-CREDIBLE, LOVE!

I can't wait to see the rest!!! They better be damn amazing! =)

Your writing pwns mine... Damn you. Yet, praise you as well. I have someone to compete with. ^^

Kidding. I loved it, Lizzy. Really did. =)

You've got me all excited now, you know that?

xoxo
Amanda

Nawww "my inspiration for writing this".

Now you have me all mushy.

Damn, I do some good inspiring then.