Many Shades of Gray - Comments

This is fucking amazing! I love the time jumps. Can't fucking wait for an update!

I just feel so sorry for Mallory... But I sympathise with Charlotte more. My mum was very much like Mal by the sounds of it.

Brilliant update, I'm so glad you've come back to this story.

It's 5:17am here in England and I demand and update.

This.story is just so incredible!
I need more!

I finally just read the newest installment of this, I'm so far behind on everyone's stories (and my own ~_~) lol. but there's something about Mallory and Pete's relationship that I really like, it's really unique and intimate and every exchange is significant even if they don't say a lot. also the way you write drunk/high dialogue is perfect, not many people can replicate that but you do it really well! the whole first scene made my heart flutter because I could practically feel the sense of lightness and giddiness they both felt.

and ahh I know what you mean about it being dead on here. but I still love writing my own story (even if I'm moving at a snail's pace lmao) and I like keeping up with the few people who feel the same. thanks for the plug as always <333

Woohoo! I am now all caught up. I loved the first meeting between her and Pete, and the way you are writing this is so different I love it

"They looked like dust crops under a thunder storm; you could see the thunder and lightening in the distant of her irises."

holy shit I love that. your sense of description is always so good. also I love that she calls her "Baby", it's just so intimate sounding despite their distance. I can't wait to see Charlotte's entrance into the story!!

loovee, update!! D:

ahh a double update! you're on fire today haha. I can't believe Pete offered to that, and that his family agreed to it! I hope Robby does well in their care. now Pete and Mallory are kinda linked for a while now so it should give them an excuse to be friends and get ~closer~

Update please!! Love this story so far!!

Update please!! Love this story so far

Update please!! Love this story so far

"no one liked us together except for us"

ohhhh I love that line. I really love the direction this story is heading; it's something I wasn't expecting, but it's really intriguing and all these little details about the present that you're dropping are making me so curious as to what happened in order for them to get here.

Love the new update a little shocked we where in present time and not back in the past but now I have more questions like is pete dead? Did they marry and the. Divorce is that why she ownes most his stuff why doesn't she have her kid. Is she still an addict or just a drunk

Much ♡ Kat

So I cant remember ever reading this but it was in my subs list so I just re read everything you have up and i have to say I reallly like how this seems to be written as if some one was telling the story or reading a book.

I did how ever notice a few small mistakes but other then that I think this story is brilliant and well done and I'm very much looking forward to this story of love and a downward sprial

Much <3 Kat

So I cant remember ever reading this but it was in my subs list so I just re read everything you have up and i have to say I reallly like how this seems to be written as if some one was telling the story or reading a book.

I did how ever notice a few small mistakes but other then that I think this story is brilliant and well done and I'm very much looking forward to this story of love and a downward sprial

Much <3 Kat

ooh I'm sensing some sexual tension so far...makes me wonder what's gonna go down in that room in the next chapter

ugh Mallory's mom sounds horrible. I know parents like that who are selfish and just go off and take care of themselves while not giving a care about their responsibilities (and children) but I'm glad she's found a drinking buddy in Pete! their conversation was hilarious (or maybe I just love seeing Pete look like an idiot )

ALSO!!! Bug's character reminds me of my Egyptian friend who is also a heartthrob. I also like that you're delving into the personalities of her other band members too! the character development seems to be really evolved this time around :)

loving this rewrite so far! I like all differences you've already made to Mallory's past (I also like the name change haha) as well as the introduction of Pete's character. I'm dreading having to experience that ending again because it already tore me apart the first time! ugh I'm already bracing myself!!

It defiantly still has the morbid tint that the original had; perhaps with a bit more loner/outcast baggage this time.