So i just started reading this. There's a line in chapter 4 that really got to me. Jos says she feels old and Pete responds by saying it's because she has "lived." I really like that. A lot. I've never thought about growing up in that way. It's a cool feeling. It flip flops the feeling of feeling old to feeling, accomplished ya know? I love it. :)
wow... this was an amazing & unique story! most fan fics are poorly written but i think you could actually be an author one day! amazing ending, by the way. i'm not one for typical,happy endings.
I read the last chapter over 7 hours ago and I still can't get the ending out of my head...that means that you're doing your job as a writer...it was so good...I just wanted to let you know how good it was
It was really good and realistic ending and maybe I even cried a little bit.. but I won't admit to that completely. It was like.. I knew he was gonna die. I just wasn't prepared for it. Anyway, amazing story.
I cried. I cried so much that I want to hate you. But I know that with depression it doesn't get better, so it had to end that way. It just had too. This was such a good story, so detailed and different. I loved it. I will definitely be reading it again.
That ending killed me! But in all honesty, it really couldn't have ended any other way. This has been such an amazing story. I will definitely read it again!
Wow, I was not expecting that ending, but I'm glad you took that route. You're an amazing writer! This has been my favorite story I've ever read on here:-)
I was hoping for a happy ending but knowing how Peter felt, how badly everything was, it was hard to have it. It all doesn't go away that easily. Even with the sad ending, this story was simply amazing. You're an incredible writer, that's for sure.
Girly this is what I absolutely LOVE about your stories! They feel so raw and gritty that you always seem to keep me on my toes :D this story was amazing girl please don't ever stop writing fantastic stories like this.
I love this story so much. I'm really sad that it's almost over! I mean, I've been reading since not long after it began. So that's pretty sad.
Speaking of sad. That last few chapters broke my heart. I just really want Pete to be okay. I love both Pete and Josie so much. They're an awesome couple and they just have to work out and stay together. It's just what's right, haha. I'm curious to see why Ashlee left him and how the Prosthetic Head thing will go. This is just such a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!