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  • lady_enygma

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    I have no problem with it being filty lol. make it as long as you want to make it, its your story, go for it
    May 31st, 2013 at 10:31am
  • AnnaCherie

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    Amazing couple
    May 31st, 2013 at 06:55am
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    @ birds ate my face
    Oooh okie dokie girly!
    May 29th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • santi santi

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    @ Selina_Kyle
    I did not forget that, I always save the little details for later Wink
    May 29th, 2013 at 10:18pm
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    Yay! They're finally together!!! Oh before I forget is Pete going to mention what she did to the tattoo?
    May 29th, 2013 at 09:58pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Oh my word how hot was that! Pete's dominance was great. they make an amazing couple
    May 29th, 2013 at 09:27am
  • owlval

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    That was amazing, loved that chapter!! And yes, Pete is just amazing!!!
    May 6th, 2013 at 07:12pm
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    This really captured him :) amazing job like always girly :)
    May 6th, 2013 at 12:18pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Lol at the argument, I love arguments that end up in a kiss. and i follow Pete on twitter but what did he do?
    May 6th, 2013 at 09:34am
  • caitlindye

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    i love this chapter! lol "grandpa stump". can't wait for the next one!!!
    May 6th, 2013 at 08:53am
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    @ birds ate my face
    Thank you! Haha, I should've known by the chapter title. But then again I don't listen to them. It's a wonderful story, whoever doesn't is off their rocker. You're the most frequent updating author I have on my recommendations/subscriptions and you never seem to disappoint me. I reread most of your chapters when I have the time so if you revise or reedit I may or may not notice.
    May 2nd, 2013 at 07:47am
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    @ DecapitateMedusa.
    Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you enjoy it; you can take all the time you need to read this, because I'm always editing and rewriting parts.
    The Coheed and Cambria song is Devil In Jersey City
    May 2nd, 2013 at 07:39am
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    This was amazing. I've been too caught up in school to read the two latest chapters but they were excellent. You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait for the next chapter. Josie was being a bit harsh, but he trashed her house! Pete actually sound like Pete in this story! His feelings become actions and I love it, he's just a bunch of chaos and Josie loves him to much to actually hate him! I think she was just in the heat of the moment when she said she hated him because he trashed her house, yet she'll always love Pete. What's the Coheed and Cambria song? because I don't listen to them much and I'd love to know which one is about her. :-)
    May 2nd, 2013 at 07:36am
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    Girls how do you do it? :) haha I don't know how you do it but you could literally write about just anything and still make it amazing! Freaking amazing update and you have me dying for more :)
    May 2nd, 2013 at 05:56am
  • Where's Your Heart?

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    I like this!!!
    May 1st, 2013 at 07:51am
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    These updates totally make my day :)
    April 30th, 2013 at 09:47pm
  • The Color Abi

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    She needs to knock Pete out like, yeah.
    April 30th, 2013 at 06:37pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Too bad that was just a dream. Pete needs to get in touch
    April 30th, 2013 at 09:55am
  • HimeTime_

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    This is one of my favourite stories on here, but Pete really needs to call her!
    April 29th, 2013 at 07:43pm
  • lady_enygma

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    love the change but she and pete really do need to talk
    April 29th, 2013 at 02:22pm