July 26th, 2015 at 05:12am
Here from the comment swap! Really enjoyed reading these ten chapters:)
Your writing style is really nice. It's fluid and natural, very much like as if written by Helena herself. The religious aspect is very nice, I like how you tied that into being a Seer. The gold ring in the eyes is a nice touch, I thought that was great especially since I have a yellow ring in my eyes which made me smile when I read it.
It's nice to have a story set in Scotland. So many stories are set in America so making this a little different is great.
Well done on what you have written so far, I'll subscribe for sure!
(Also if you want a layout I would love to help!)
Thank you so much for your kind comments! :) I must try to update this a little further as it's kind of fallen by the wayside a little. Hope to see you around here again! :)