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  • CrystalBlueDisguise

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    I loved this story. Your style of writing is so good. I'm very sad that the sequel was deleted :(
    October 1st, 2015 at 09:25pm
  • princessmikey14

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    chapter 14 is my fav so far! awesome job! I love aaron's line "Wow, baseball and ice cream afterwards, You really know how to treat a lady, Zachary!" I could so see him saying that! I love this story so far and I can't wait to read more!
    October 21st, 2013 at 05:57am
  • Robynn9436

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    I loved this story! I can't wait for the sequel!!
    August 30th, 2013 at 10:29pm
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    @ NikNorthman
    Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Cute
    August 24th, 2013 at 02:01am
  • NikNorthman

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    I'm still on chapter 7 since I started to read it yesterday. But I must say I'm in love your story!
    August 24th, 2013 at 01:48am
  • Robynn9436

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    This was such a sweet chapter! Update soon please!
    August 23rd, 2013 at 02:52am
  • Robynn9436

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    Zak shirtless and wearing a cowboy hat..... Thank you for putting that image into my head!! Wink

    I loved this chapter ( and every other chapter.) Update soon please!
    August 17th, 2013 at 01:35pm
  • basket case

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    THAT LAST PARAGRAPH KILLED ME! This is my favourite story, hands down.
    August 14th, 2013 at 12:55pm
  • Kamillya143

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    I can't wait for her to meet his mom!!! This is really good!!! Mr. Green
    August 14th, 2013 at 02:01am
  • Robynn9436

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    Wow!! I'm kind of speechless! This chapter was awesome!

    I can't wait for the next chapter and the sequel!
    August 5th, 2013 at 12:21pm
  • Kamillya143

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    OH MY GODH THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!!!!! You did an awesome job!!!! Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    August 4th, 2013 at 03:48pm
  • basket case

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    OH MY GOD HELP IM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! It's all good that you'll be gone for a week (I don't update for months at a time sometimes so I'm no one to complain!)
    All I can say is that I REALLY look forward to the next update and the sequel! Keep up the amazing work ♥
    August 4th, 2013 at 02:34pm
  • basket case

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    I've literally been checking up every few hours to see if it's been updated hahah
    August 1st, 2013 at 11:11am
  • fall0ut

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    @ Gypsy Rose
    I can promise you it'll be awesome! ;)
    July 28th, 2013 at 04:01am
  • Gypsy Rose

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    I was so excited reading this and then i see that there is going to be a sequal for this story and is finally going to have some crazy ghost hunting. to which i can't wait for! IT'S GONNA BE AWESOME! :)
    July 28th, 2013 at 03:07am
  • Robynn9436

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    With a cliffhanger like that you better update soon! Mr. Green
    July 25th, 2013 at 10:42pm
  • basket case

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    OMFG I START READING THIS STORY AND THE ONLY CLIFF HANGER IN THE ENTIRE THING IS THE UPDATE WITHOUT ANOTHER CHAPTER!

    I'm sorry for yelling, but damn girl, this story is AMAZING.
    July 25th, 2013 at 03:13pm
  • meredith.rose

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    U better hurry up lololol that was so unfair lol
    July 25th, 2013 at 06:30am
  • Sailor Amethyst

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    You're so evil for that ending. I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Mr. Green
    July 25th, 2013 at 04:28am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Please don't take forever to update! I wanna know what happens! I litetally gasped at the end:P awesome update; )
    July 25th, 2013 at 03:33am
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