A Life I Left Behind; For You - Comments

  • amazing story! You must make a sequel. Especially with that ending!
    July 31st, 2009 at 04:54am
  • You should make a sequel, that would be sweet
    I mean, and the whole kinda plot would be with finding matt/*being random* him becoming a serial killer and comes back for gerard and frank
    Love the story! :D
    July 31st, 2009 at 02:12am
  • it's over!!! it doesn't feel like it should be though. i think it could go on if you wanted it to. just be careful, sequels are tricky, i would know.

    but excellent job, this was a well written story!! i'm upset it's over.

    <3
    July 31st, 2009 at 02:11am
  • Oh my God, I'm going to miss this story so much! D:

    But yay! Frank and Gerard finally had sex! X3 (Even though I could have sworn that they'd done it earlier!)

    And yay! LAURA IS PREGNANT WITH MIKEY'S BABY. :D X3 That made me grin so much.

    But booo... this is over. :(
    You better do a sequel or I will hunt you down with sharp pointy things... no, not those kinda sharp pointy things... I mean the kind that hurt.

    Like... BREAD KNIVES.

    I LOVE YOU.
    July 31st, 2009 at 02:04am
  • aww the end? it was amazing. Update wicked soon Please!
    July 28th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    this can't end ):
    it's like the best frerard on here ):
    On a better note...
    Last chapter was amazing :D:D
    x
    July 23rd, 2009 at 10:10am
  • YES!

    HALLELUJAH!

    AT LAST!

    They've FINALLY worked out what we knew all along!

    I hope MCR gang up on him and attack him with croquet mallets. XD

    Frankie don't panic. Breeeeeathe, baby. *pats*

    I'm gonna miss this story! Do a sequel or I will tie you to a chair and MAKE you write a sequel. :file:
    July 23rd, 2009 at 12:28am
  • great chapter! i loved the ending. i was like, "you can always count on jepha to make a situation a little lighter!" great descriptions though! i love how you told how old and stressed the guy all look. i could picture a weary group, soon overtaken with fear and distress! makes for an awesome story line! keep rolling with it!
    July 22nd, 2009 at 05:14am
  • Over so soon? No! :'(

    Actually, I’d go so far as to say everything’s kind of better now, other than My Chemical Romance no longer have a drummer, and Frank’s been attacked, and there’s a murderer on the loose.
    “No biggy,” Ray said with a roll of his eyes when I mentioned all this to him.

    No better way to say it, Ray ;) No biggie at all, is it?

    Gerard shouldn't feel like it's his fault; it isn't. Matt's just stupid. I can't believe he was actually going to go through with it and attempt to kill Frank. Who does that?! I think Matt's the only one on my 'bad' list. I mean, he beats the rest! Attempted murder?!

    And poor Frank, freaking out about it...although he has every right to. I don't think he'd be mad at Gerard, because it's not like Gerard said, "Kill Frank." He said that as long as Frank was alive, he was with him. Nothing there Frank could hate him for. People say that all the time. It's not like there was a hidden message in there, or like he secretly wanted to kill him. No. Frank won't be mad. Will he...?

    As I walk away, Jeph’s voice echoes down the hall: “Isn’t it weird that none of you noticed your own band mate was missing?”
    HAHA! :lmfao Well said, Jeph ;)

    I'm going to miss this story so much :cry But at least it ended with the two of them together, instead of ending with both boys depressed and saddened...It's with bitterness that I ask you to update soon. I kinda want you to, so I can find out what happens. But at the same time I don't, because it'll mean it's over...

    *shuts eyes*
    July 20th, 2009 at 07:30pm
  • The update was amazing! ♥
    I feel so bad for everyone, and how they didn't know it was their own band member who attacked Frankie (are they certain?). Cry
    I am going to miss this story so much when it comes to an end! Really!
    It was one of the first stories I began reading an subscribed to on Mibba, and it was my first favourite too. In Love
    I can't wait to see how the last chapter will pan out.
    Thank you so much for the update!
    Can't wait to read the next one too!
    :hug: :arms:
    July 20th, 2009 at 02:38pm
  • whoa what?? last chapter next chapter?? that seems really abrupt...unless you're making a sequel?? ;) lol

    but they're certain it's matt?? that just seems to obvious. sure gerard screamed it at him but didn't we establish that it wasn't him?? i can't quite remember.

    can't wait for more!!

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    July 20th, 2009 at 06:38am
  • Yes! The internet is finally allowing me to read this story!

    Anyway, I honestly believe that Frank with a broken nose is the funniest/cutest thing ever! He probably sounds a bit like me as I have horrible hayfever right at this moment and I have a very blocked nose. XD

    Awww... Gerard, Frankie won't leave you. :(

    Oh, and in America, it's cops isn't it? Not policemen?

    AND ZOMG RAY AND KAREN! SO FUCKING CUTE. In Love In Love
    June 26th, 2009 at 01:17am
  • I don't usually like Frerard but this one seems interesting. I also am VERY happy that Mikey's girlfriend is called Laura, that's my name! I LOVE MIKEY!!!!
    June 24th, 2009 at 09:38pm
  • Oh! How dare they start off asking Frank all these questions? He just came out from surgery? WTF?!

    “I’b trying to rebember! Gib me a mobent!” he says loudly, and when he grips his side in pain, I step in.
    I just gotta say I love the whole ‘b’ you inserted. Makes it seem so real. I can imagine and actually hear Frank talking like that in my head. So realistic! I love it :]

    The policeman with dreadlocks turns to his blonde companion. “I think we’ve got enough time to break for coffee, Trevor.”
    “Maybe a doughnut too, Richie,” Blondie nods.
    “Let’s come back later, Trevor.”
    “Let’s, Richie.”
    With a nod to each other, they rise together.

    What the fuck? Did they seriously just do that? Hahaha, I can’t believe it! I don’t know if I’ll get over that. I mean, seriously? Are they from this planet? XD. Whateves…

    Normally when he kisses me, it’s like there’s no-one else in the world at all, and I just want to be near him, feel him. Now, I know that I don’t deserve him, to kiss him, to be with him—not if it means he’d be in any kind of pain.
    Oooo. Don’t do that. He needs you. Frank is gonna detect something, I know it. Whether or not it’ll be in the near future or a long while from now is another story. But Gerard shouldn’t feel too bad…well, I can see why he would, so there’s not much for me to say there. But still. No one could have done anything. No one ever suspected it’d actually happen.

    “I’ll... I’ll be back later,” I say quietly as I pull away. His hurt look makes me feel even worse; I turn away quickly.
    Look what you’re doing to him, Gerard! Stop it. Stop it now!

    Keith? Who’s he? I wanna know too. Oh, never mind…bad past history, is there? Was he the one who messed Gerard up before Frank came around the first time? He’s definitely on my list, along with that owner of the deli/café and matt. Oh, and Ray, for hurting Frank, right? Was it Ray?

    GRRRRRRR. I wanted to know! Lol. But I know all will be revealed in time. I still want to know what happened. I’m scared, but I’m sure Frank won’t leave him, no matter what happens. He can’t. They belong together. They must stay together. MUST.

    “...I won’t lie to you Ray, I’ve had a lovely time with you the last few weeks, and I may have felt something—something small—but that might have just been indigestion...” I laugh softly, fondly.
    Oh wow. So I guess it wasn’t Ray O.O This just leaves me to Matt. I’mma chop the bitch’s balls off now. Dude, he just asked for a death sentence for hurting Frank.

    My life really is a fucking melodrama.
    Hahaha, it is, isn’t it? XD When did Karen and Ray ever even have time to go and…? Hahaha.

    Happy your mini-hiatus is over :] I missed this story ♥

    And I name this page 'Sexy Love' b/c it's on my iPod right now XD. I don't see how Ne-Yo and MCR mix, but there we have it, lol
    June 24th, 2009 at 05:11am
  • what? What?! ray and karen? omg. totally is a melodrama and i love it. update wicked soon!
    June 23rd, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • p.s. RAY?!
    June 23rd, 2009 at 12:00am
  • dude! i loved it! gerard is just so insecure though! i hate how he puts so little trust in frank. the last thing frank wants to do is hurt gerard and he needs to know that! damn. his life is a melodrama! bigger than that! it's a titanic drama! very nice though. totally worth the hiatus!
    June 23rd, 2009 at 12:00am
  • who would ever suspest ray?/???????
    June 22nd, 2009 at 01:15am
  • hahaha it would've fit had it been ray. but i like the way you handled it by showing us that portion of an obvious hidden conversation. but i think you knew we would think that...so, now i need another theory hah.

    excellent update, i'm glad your exams are over!! you're finally free!!

    can't wait for more!! :)

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    June 21st, 2009 at 07:42pm
  • greatttt update (:
    I really love this story, yay for no more mini hiatus,
    more updates soon and im so glad it wasnt Ray (:
    xxxxx
    June 21st, 2009 at 03:54pm