Okay, cats. Cats, cats, cats. CATS. cats cats cats cats. <---I think I've made my point
I love how much description you have in the first chapter. I know the story is still young, and description starts to go downhill as the story moves along, but I think if you keep it up you've got an awesome, adorable, fluffy story ahead of you. I really liked it.
Awh this sounds like it will be pretty interesting! Plus Louie is such a cutie! ((: and for the chapter question: He will probably play a fair amount of a role in Sutton's life because he is the one and only thing in her life at this moment that understands her. He is just a cat, but I know my cat plays a big part in my life ^.^
Okay, cats. Cats, cats, cats. CATS. cats cats cats cats. <---I think I've made my point
I love how much description you have in the first chapter. I know the story is still young, and description starts to go downhill as the story moves along, but I think if you keep it up you've got an awesome, adorable, fluffy story ahead of you. I really liked it.
p.s. cats