Fear - Comments

THAT DREAM THOUGH!!! <3 Why you gotta play me like that!? <33 (: haha I enjoy Barsad's kindness towards Londyn.. You can see the friendship that is being portrayed.(: Londyn missing Bane, plus standing out in the darkening sky, plus that one raindrop that leads to pouring rain was a great combo! I'm just really curious as to why Bane acted the way he did towards Londyn? You would think he would be secretly just as happy to see her? ;O Let's continue!!!!

-Hannah! <3

Lol she shouldn't have been surprised at something unexpected happening at this point...it is Bane after all

The latest chapter made me tear up a bit. T_T

Talia you trifling wench!

That was wonderful...I definitely felt like I was watching the movie :) amazing job that was always one of my favorite scenes

YOU TOTALLY WORKED THE SCENE OF THE MOVIE AND THE SCENE OF YOUR WRITING TOGETHER PERFECTLY!!!! GENIUS, words can't even explain!! I was literally biting my nails the entire time, this is so good. This chapter shows a lot more of Bane's ruthless side, (which is pretty hot LOL) and his sweet side as he realizes he must drug her so she doesn't witness his actions and so he can protect Londyn, and when he realizes he feels pain leaving Londyn <33 awww His sweet side AND his ruthless, you gave us, the readers, the best of both worlds in this chapter!! :D

-Hannah!

Her parents are so worried about her.... It's sad, but since I, as the reader know that Londyn is okay, makes me feel not as guilty hahaha(: Bane almost broke her leg, I bet he would've liked that to a certain extent! LOL and That was really thoughtful of Bane to give Londyn what he did, even though it's so simple, the symbolism and what it represents is really cool and that was probably a super huge deal to Bane, obviously why he was jittery (WHICH IS ALSO PRETTY RAD! haha) I cant wait to see the next chapter (which is the second part of this chapter?) :) :) :)

-Hannah! <3

Tht was a cool chapter the fact tht Selina can see the adoration in both Londyn and Bane's eyes is just amazing and I really do hope tht Bane does something for her on her birthday at least I mean it would be a nice gesture can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm gonna kill Bane if he doesn't do something for her birthday!

If it were up to me, I'd force you to update every 5 minutes! Absolutely love the chapter, can't wait for more!!

This chapter was awesome!!! The fact that Selina can see not only Londyn's obvious feelings for Bane, but for her to actually be able to see it on Bane, must mean that it's kind of growing even more on him! (: Also, how Bane is calm and collected in the situation, you can really feel his authority over Selina Kyle, if that makes sense :D haha and That was really cute how you added in her birthday situation, I wouldn't have even thought of that. Very cute addition and I have a feeling Bane will be doing something a little special for Londyn maybe? (:

Anne Hathaway did a great job as cat woman:) when I heard she was going to play the role I honestly thought she couldn't do it...boy was I wrong!

Great chapter hon :)

They r just an adorable odd couple even tho they aren't dating but still adorable, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awww this chapter was adorable! The fact that she gives Bane adoration when he doesn't receive any, just makes me smile so much! The humor is this chapter was sprinkled just right and the combination of cute sarcasm just made this chapter over the top! Great chapter, im interested in seeing what Selina has to say!

--Hannah

I wonder if he will hold up his end of the truce

I'm loving this story more and more...I laughed when Londyn finally woke up can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Son of a bitch. <<< Made me laugh as I read it because I understood she really wasn't that mad at Bane for punching her (: So that's it from Talia until it's time huh? Can't wait to see what happens then! The ending of this chapter was really relaxing, with the truce between them and the sunset on Londyn, I really enjoyed that creative touch! (:

-Hannah

AHHLKGujfpdosihgds I"M SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!!! I'm in love... with this story :)

I'm in love with this story, Bane maybe an asshole but I just adore him very much lol it's like u can't help but love the guy he maybe be bad but he is a cool bad in my opinion can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Lol bane is such a dick, but you can't help but love him. He wants her and its deeply entertaining to read, please update soon :)

I totally loved that you had Bane snap a little, it really did fit well and just the flow of adjusting to his actions while reading was remarkable! We'll played ;)