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  • OctoberA7X

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    Come on bane! If he hadn't hit her then maybe she would've answered!
    April 30th, 2013 at 01:07pm
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    I loooove this story
    Please update soon
    April 30th, 2013 at 06:24am
  • Space Juju

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    Ahhhh!!!! I don't know what to say! only more!!!
    April 30th, 2013 at 05:53am
  • Hannah1007700

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    JUST GOT REAL OMG *SPOILER ALERT* LONDYN KISSED BANE ?!?!?! I wonder if you could write in Bane's POV just how he reacts to the kiss maybe? :) That would be super awesome oh my goodness Ive been waiting for this one spark that will soon light a FIRE!!!! <3 :)
    April 30th, 2013 at 05:51am
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    @ Hannah1007700
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    Thank you oh so much!
    It was more of the lines that Londyn had a terrible feeling but she was cut off. I'm sorry if it seemed as if she was going to say I love you
    That is for later ! ;) ❤
    April 30th, 2013 at 12:16am
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    *she loves him
    April 30th, 2013 at 12:08am
  • Hannah1007700

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    I love Bane's line where he says something like "you speak of trust and yet you don't show it" haha and this was a really good bonding chapter <3 Before Londyn was cut off by Barsad when she said "I think..." Was she about to say age loves him?!?!?! :D thanks for the constant amazing updates (:
    April 30th, 2013 at 12:07am
  • Space Juju

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    UHHHH this is getting good! I wonder what she ll so when she hears about Bane s plan
    April 29th, 2013 at 10:52pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    O wow....I can't wait to see what she thinks of his plan
    April 29th, 2013 at 10:18pm
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    @ Hannah1007700
    ❤☺ Thank you so much.

    There will be more training. I plan it to be more.. Chaotic ? Maybe hehe
    April 29th, 2013 at 05:38pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    Ahhh! I love how she threw the chair at Bane and then she sheepishly apologized and Bane teased her!! Hahahaha :) And at the end when Londyn places her shaky fingers on his mask, is she about to take his mask off OMG I cant wait to find out. And I really liked the fact that Bane feels bad when Londyn is crying and he gives her his word. That means a lot like just reading it, you can understand the detail in the words that are said! GREAT chapter! Will they be training again any time soon? I read this last chapter and now I'm going to sleep, but this really made my day, thank you! -- Hannah
    April 29th, 2013 at 06:55am
  • RomansRevenge;;

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    I am dying to know what's going to happen please update soon!!!!
    April 29th, 2013 at 04:35am
  • OctoberA7X

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    Wait no wait!!! I wanna know what happens!!!
    April 29th, 2013 at 04:29am
  • Space Juju

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    I love this, I really need to know what will happen. More soon!
    April 29th, 2013 at 12:40am
  • thardyv

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    Thank you guys so much ❤☺
    April 29th, 2013 at 12:38am
  • DareToDreamXX

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    I love how quickly you update this story! Makes me oh so happy! Fantastic as usual! :)
    April 29th, 2013 at 12:37am
  • nothingpersonal10

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    Love this story
    April 29th, 2013 at 12:28am
  • thardyv

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    @ Hannah1007700
    I love it just as much. I just don't want to push it but I want to explore Bane limits heheheh
    I will be updating soon ❤☺
    April 28th, 2013 at 09:11pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    *Miranda Tate
    April 28th, 2013 at 08:57pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    I love the silly banter and verbal challenges Londyn always has for Bane and I Love the fearlessness of Londyn jumping into the water and the fact that bane jumped into save get made my heart skip a beat. Miranda Rate wants to eliminate Londyn? JEALOUSY! Hahaha shes not the only woman in banes life ;) Can't wait for the next updates! <3 --Hannah
    April 28th, 2013 at 08:56pm
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