It's funny that you say you struggled with this chapter because its my favorite so far. I think the way you have characters fully think things through and reason with themselves adds to the quality of your writing overall, making it feel like the characters have unique and complex thought processes. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter to hear how Vic takes Kellin's decision. I think Vic will feel guilty and be even more conflicted because he is that much more tempted yet feels like he is making Kellin compromise his morals
May 1st, 2013 at 02:25am