May 4th, 2013 at 05:14pm
Son of a Preacher - Comments
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Why you little! That was not nice at all. and for all we know it could just be his dad asking him about his night then again i know better so its probably not that but yeah. sometimes i hate when people write one word statements because then its really hard to detect the tone but still. i wonder if his dad would be like "YOU RADIATE OF SEX! YOU SINNER! GO GET THE HOLY WATER!" I laughed too hard at my dumb statements, just ignore it like most people do. You also shouldn't have put warning because then i knew what was going to happen. BUT beside the point, i really love this story so much and wish you updated more than once a day but yeah. i cant wait for the next chapter (:May 4th, 2013 at 05:01pm
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How dare you make me feel so many feels in one setting! I love you.May 4th, 2013 at 02:00pm
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shit just got realMay 4th, 2013 at 09:48am
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You're mean
Thanks for he fucking cliff hanger amazing story...May 4th, 2013 at 07:07am -
omg asdfghjkl;' perFECTMay 4th, 2013 at 05:32am
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You should update like. Now.May 2nd, 2013 at 09:22pm
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AWE! I actually reread your story last night waiting for this update to come. i really like this story so much, like i feel like obsessed with it. BOYFRIENDS?! YES! Even though he feels really guilty. ah. I'm just thinking of all the things that could happen. i'd totally read that prequel dealing with the whole Jeremy and including jaime. I feel bad for Jaime because i mean its not like he can help his feelings and then there's Vic. we dont know whats happened yet in his past so yeah. Kellin's innocence makes me laugh. I JUST WANT/NEED MORE! IM NOT SORRY!May 2nd, 2013 at 12:22pm
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awh boyfriends /('0')/
my feels <3May 2nd, 2013 at 07:35am -
this story is amazing and one of my favorites. you're an amazing writer and i hope you continue! have a nice day c:May 2nd, 2013 at 06:56am
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Awesome! Well, message me I guess if you wanna talk about it :) I know you obviously have to worry about this one, and I will be voraciously reading it as you continue to rock my socks each update lol. I absolutely love how you write Vic's character and I feel like Jaime has a story that needs to be told too though. I mean, he's in an unrequited love with his bandmate and best friend! @ jealousmindsxMay 2nd, 2013 at 06:33am
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@ wowfairy13
I might actually take you up on that. :DMay 2nd, 2013 at 06:25am -
I forgot that I had also wanted to comment on this mysterious Jeremy fellow... sounds like a real whore. Lol can't wait for the time comes for that to reveal itself. In the meantime keep up the great work. (PS that backstory with Jeremy could.make an interesting prequel, maybe throw in a little Fuencaido action? Let me know if you might be interested in a collab once Kellin and Vic have their fun (: )May 2nd, 2013 at 06:20am
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*does happy dance* Yay you updated! *reads chapter* Holy shit my name is in the author's notes! Oh plus Kellin and Vic are totally gettin it on... but yay, seriously, I couldn't imagine a more perfect follow up to the previous chapter. And like you always do, even other characters have dimension esp. In Jaime's case. The two things that I wanted to mention about this chapter are Vic's thoughts swirling around, I can't emphasize enough how.much that makes this whole plot work. I hate when authors just have a character go from one stage in the storyline to the next WITH ABSOLUTELY NO TRANSITION!!! You excell at writing in third person from a character's mindset and POV without it being to much like a.first person narrative. Also, I'd like to say that the Spanish tongue roll Kellin has the privilege of experiencing is officially the sexiest thing ever. Best. Makeout. Scene. icantevenomgthefeelsMay 2nd, 2013 at 06:14am
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asdfghjkl;' this story is pERFMay 2nd, 2013 at 05:53am
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Aw aw aw aw ohmygod awMay 2nd, 2013 at 05:46am
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@alicat72998 They are, they are. Heh. I didn't want it to happen so soon but I couldn't wait any longer!May 2nd, 2013 at 05:37am
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So... Are tey boyfriends now???? :DDDMay 2nd, 2013 at 05:32am
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Aw yiss Vic. Love your Kellin yissss. This was great! Can't wait for the next update, dear :)May 2nd, 2013 at 05:26am
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aah this is amazing!!!May 1st, 2013 at 10:28pm
I am glad you brought the warning up because I'm actually about to change it. Haha. Thanks!