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  • wowfairy13

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    It's funny that you say you struggled with this chapter because its my favorite so far. I think the way you have characters fully think things through and reason with themselves adds to the quality of your writing overall, making it feel like the characters have unique and complex thought processes. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter to hear how Vic takes Kellin's decision. I think Vic will feel guilty and be even more conflicted because he is that much more tempted yet feels like he is making Kellin compromise his morals
    May 1st, 2013 at 02:25am
  • Hannah Snowdon

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    That was not bad. O: I looove this story. :D it's so creative. :3
    May 1st, 2013 at 02:12am
  • Anthem.

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    its not bad at all. i really enjoyed it. I just want to know more about Vic's past "relationships" and why he acts the way he does.I feel like at one point Vic was the weak one and then it all changed and then he just kinda became this manwhore we know right now, for this story of course. i feel like i can just imagine Vic hearing that last sentence and then his ears perking up and then smirking on the inside. ah, another update soon? like today or tomorrow? addictions aren't great or fun.
    April 30th, 2013 at 12:28pm
  • AndThenSheBled

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    haha i loved it!!
    April 30th, 2013 at 05:21am
  • sonnybunny124

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    I lovelovelove this story. You need to update soon :O
    April 30th, 2013 at 05:10am
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    I really hope this means that you're still updating this story tonight. i waiting. ha (:
    April 30th, 2013 at 03:29am
  • NightmareOfLife

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    awesome fanfic I love it! hope you continue soon :)
    April 29th, 2013 at 08:22pm
  • aashbyinmypants

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    arghhhhhhhhhh YOU AND YUR CLIFF HANGERS MOG
    April 29th, 2013 at 07:22pm
  • AndThenSheBled

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    awh i hope vicky is respectful:)
    April 29th, 2013 at 03:40am
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    @Anthem. and @ A-DiDDy101 That makes me so happy to hear, thank you! I'm quite addicted to writing it.
    April 29th, 2013 at 03:37am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    I gotta agree with Anthem. I hope Vic nots gonna screw Kellin over, no pun intended (not sure if I used that right but whatever)
    April 29th, 2013 at 03:23am
  • Anthem.

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    Thank god you are updating this tomorrow. i swear that i've become addicted to this story, i just really love it. (:
    April 29th, 2013 at 02:55am
  • Ofmiceandmen123

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    Absolutely LOVE this story! Dave and busters is indeed freaking awesome :D
    April 27th, 2013 at 09:48pm
  • Anthem.

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    LOVE IT SO MUCH! (sorry didn't know i pressed submit by accident) but yeah and i really cant wait for the next chapter because i just love it so. (:
    April 27th, 2013 at 03:38pm
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    LOVE IT SO MUCH! (sorry didn't know i pressed submit by accident) but yeah and i really cant wait for the next chapter because i just love it so. (:
    April 27th, 2013 at 03:38pm
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    THIS STORY! AH! I
    April 27th, 2013 at 03:37pm
  • Hannah Snowdon

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    So fucking cute. :333
    April 27th, 2013 at 02:55pm
  • Preciadology

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    Awwww this was so sweeeeeet!! Aaah I'm screaming >.<
    April 27th, 2013 at 07:40am
  • AndThenSheBled

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    that was absolutely fuckin adorable!!!!
    i really hope Vic turns his mind around and falls in love!!!
    update soon <3!!!
    April 27th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • Preciadology

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    AWWW. Will Vic actually fall in love with Kellin or will it just be a one night stand or..Anyways, THIS IS AMAZING. PLEASE CONTINUE, DEAR. :]
    April 24th, 2013 at 12:41pm
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