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  • P!nkPunkRockBubblez

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    What a CUTE chapter! It was nice seeing everyone together on such good terms and in such good moods! :)
    June 11th, 2013 at 07:26pm
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    Thank you sweetheart(: Glad you're really warming up to SG. The last two chapters are towards the top of my favorites that's for sure. Also glad you loved Grandma Anderson just felt Sky needed some old re-connections being back in her home state!(:
    May 31st, 2013 at 05:52pm
  • P!nkPunkRockBubblez

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    Okay. So how you totally started the chapter "Let's Party Wisconsin Style" was AWESOME. I mean, I could totally see and HEAR EVERYTHING. It was like I was backstage with SG watching them ..."Here's your baby, mamma duck" Oooooh Matty <3 And I LOVE how you added that Jordon hates when fans call him by his REAL name! You've done your research! As have I ... Ahahaha Nice chapter !
    May 31st, 2013 at 04:49pm
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    Grandma Anderson was THE BEST. LOVE her! And I LOVE how Kayla always takes the baby ... AND I actually REALLY LOVED this chapter! I totally understand SG's character now! She's not so bad after all ... I guess. I mean, I'd probably be a total whore too with those men anyways ... "Yo, Dylan needs to part-ay tonight!" OH. MY. GOD. I totally heard him saying that! Hahahaha! On to the next chapter ...
    May 31st, 2013 at 04:39pm
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    Glad you liked that line! It was something where I was like, I need Danny to do or say something funny/memorable before I had him do what he did to SG. I'm still not sure what I want to do with Kayla. It was one of those, there needs to be a new character because this is really seven people to write about total and there just needs to be someone new to add to the story. You should read her character bio.
    May 26th, 2013 at 07:41pm
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    "Yeah, hi, I'm still here. I didn't want nor did I need to know the details of you impregnating SG," Danny added from the kitchen table. LOL OH MY GOD! Ahahahaha! I've never laughed so hard! And this Kayla chick? What in the world!? Okay, great that Matty thinks he has found someone ... But girls just make things complicated! Uuuuuuuugh ... I just hope she doesn't cause more drama ... And WHOA. Didn't see THAT coming! But then again, the whole "mother" "baby" thing that Danny and SG had going on was kind of weird ... *Shifty eyes*
    May 26th, 2013 at 07:27pm
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    I'm glad you really enjoyed that chapter! It's been my favorite to write so far! I'm glad you think she's starting to grow up. My whole point of this chapter was to pretty much show how having a baby made her grow up. Thank you again for the feed back it's greatly appreciated! Also I think you'll like my big plans coming up.
    May 26th, 2013 at 12:52am
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    I REALLY enjoyed the last chapter! OMG! It was strangely CUTE. And I'm GLAD SG realizes that shes NOT ready for another marriage! Probably the SMARTEST thing she's ever done ... I'm definitely starting to warm up to her ... SLOWLY.
    And you are doing a WONDERFUL job! Your welcome! I give as much feedback as possible! I know how awesome it feels! :P
    May 25th, 2013 at 09:19pm
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    I just love how strongly you feel about these characters! Makes me feel like I'm doing a decent job(: Thank you for supporting this story so much and giving me your feedback so often!(:
    May 23rd, 2013 at 05:53pm
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    Jake has all the right reasons to be worried! It's his brother after all and it IS SKYLAR-GRACE ... As for SG, I guess she's okaaaay now. I still don't trust her. Who knows, she could get bored of Jordon and f off again ... I can't imagine her actually being committed to Jordon because of her whorish tendencies. Sure, people can change. But it's definitely not as easy as people say it is!
    May 23rd, 2013 at 05:19pm
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    Yay! Glad I get brownie points for that! And that's exactly what I was going for with the baby picture. I Googled newborn blue eyed baby with the hopes of getting one with a little extra chub then I saw that pic and automatically my brain was like yelling 'Leila!'
    May 22nd, 2013 at 07:22am
  • P!nkPunkRockBubblez

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    OMFG AND YOU UPDATED THE CHARACTERS!! (I don't know why I clicked there but ...) THE BABY HAS HER EYES & JORDON'S CHUB!! LOVE IT! Ahahaha
    May 22nd, 2013 at 07:10am
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    YES! I hate when stories don't pay attention to that kind of stuff! It just like ruins the whole thing! So you get some MAJOR brownie points for that! Hail
    May 22nd, 2013 at 07:09am
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    Yea had to fast forward like three and a half months. At least I did the math of when she woulda gotten pregnant with Jordon's baby. Do I get brownie points for that? And I was like OMG what could I possibly say happened during all this and it being in a blur was the best I came up with. I'm glad you liked that though.
    May 22nd, 2013 at 06:38am
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    LOL OMG! "I had had enough of pregnant Skylar so here we go" I laughed SO hard at that! 'Cause I was thinking "Whoaaa, she's in labor already!?" Ahahaha I liked how you said 'everything was a blur' cause I would imagine it to be too! Just PAIN. Blur. PAAAAIN. Blur. Pain. Blur. PAAAAAAAAAIN. PUSH.PAIN. Blur. BABY! Ahahaha! Anyways, I can't imagine how things are going to go with this new baby! :O
    May 22nd, 2013 at 05:43am
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    Like I never do research for this story. Then I felt the need to so you could get a feel for what the cars were like and if you wanted to look them up. I don't know just felt the need to.
    I was thinking today. The way that SG willingly told Jordon she cheated when they were first together kind of shows that she's always cared more about. I don't know it you get that but it's what I get haha. Glad you didn't think SG wasn't as bad here(:
    May 21st, 2013 at 01:45pm
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    I have a hard time including the men too! Ahaha I'll be writing then I'll be like "Oh shit! I forgot Matty was still here!" Or "Oh snap! Dylan was in the middle of doing something!" Ahahaha ANYWAYS ... I REALLY enjoyed this chapter! I was like "Hey, SG ain't so bad in this one ..." I thought her and Jordon were actually pretty cute! Crazy AND I would like to say the amount of research you did with the cars is pretty freaking AMAZING! I thought I was the only one who researched shit like that for stories ahaha. YOU DESERVE A COOKIE! Thumb up
    May 21st, 2013 at 06:45am
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    Thank you so much(: I do try and include every boy somehow even if they have only one line unless it's s chapter where it's just Skylar and someone like the chapter where Sky initially cheated on Jordon. Don't blame you for still disliking her I'm not too fond either but I'm going to try and make her get her shit together. Plus she's pregnant so it shouldn't be too hard.
    May 20th, 2013 at 12:59pm
  • P!nkPunkRockBubblez

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    KNEW IT! Hahahaha But OMG this chapter was awesome! I LOVE those boys and how you always make sure to include ALL of them as much as possible! Well, I did get a better sense of her character in this chapter ... Buuuuuuut ... I still dislike her. *shifty eyes*
    May 20th, 2013 at 11:35am
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    Yea it was an idea taken from you... oops sorry, not sorry(; I can't wait for your next chapter by the way and I know I'm interested in where I'm taking this as well because I have several very different ideas but I'm not exactly sure which to use. Like, the new chapter I just posted has some more info on Skylar that could have continued to go unknown but at the same time I think helps add to why she has so many issues with drugs and self harm.
    May 20th, 2013 at 10:31am