Wicked - Comments

Sorry I took so long to comment! I really liked how I could read this like an original story and still get what's happening, I loved your attention to description as well, it's amazing! Overall this is amazing! :O

My first thought is: how are you going to screw me over and ruin the somewhat content moment?

So far this is good. This is very, very good.
Oh, Yoochun. So smooth.
I started flailing when she pulled the ring from the glass and Heidi laughed at me.
*crying at the romanticism of it all!
Gah, Yoochun is just perfect!
This story was amazing! It made me want to cry and love and hug and cry some more. Really, truly awesome work. Loved it!

Jaejoong...please, do not open your mouth anymore or I will be forced to strangle you.

Omgomgomgomgomg. I thought Yunho was dead there for a second. o.o

That. That right there was a perfect death for Changmin. I'm not even sorry that I am happy he is dead. Like, seriously. He was a evil bastard and he got what he deserved!

Jaejoong...please, do not open your mouth anymore or I will be forced to strangle you.

Omgomgomgomgomg. I thought Yunho was dead there for a second. o.o

That. That right there was a perfect death for Changmin. I'm not even sorry that I am happy he is dead. Like, seriously. He was a evil bastard and he got what he deserved!

NO, YOOCHUN. CHANGMIN=BAD MAN. BAAAAAD MAN.

That video. Those cowards. Yoochun and Yunho better break some balls and some skulls!!!! If not...
I'M A GONNA WHOOP SOMEBODY'S ASS.

DON'T DRINK THE COFFEE. IT TASTES FUNNY SO JJ MUST HAVE DRUGGED IT.

I KNEW CHANGMIN WAS BAD AND I KNEW SOMEWHERE DEEP DOWN JJ COULDN'T BE ALL GOOD EITHER. I KNEW IT. I KNEEEEWWWWWW IT.

Junsu never did any of those things?

JAEJOONG SHOT HIM?!?!?! Oh, that bitch is gonna die. He IS GOING TO DIE.

MY FEELS BOMO GONL;SADJF WHAT IS AIR I CAN'T.

Aish, these two I swear. They're such a beautiful, wonderful couple. And when Yoochun told her that he loved her... This was such a sweet and wonderful chapter. A nice break from the insanity and brutality and the evil people. -.-
Loved the update!

Aish, these two I swear. They're such a beautiful, wonderful couple. And when Yoochun told her that he loved her... This was such a sweet and wonderful chapter. A nice break from the insanity and brutality and the evil people. -.-
Loved the update!

Hye, don't get your neck slit...Good God, woman. I love my Junsu, but I can't trust him anymore...

IS CHANGMIN A BAD GUY?? DID HE JUST THREATEN JUNSU BECAUSE HE'S GOING TO KILL HIM??? o.o I LEAVE MY BET ON CHANGMIN FOR RIGHT NOW.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I CAN'T SCREAM SO I'M DOING IT VIA TYPING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I KNEW IT WAS COMING. I KNEW IT, BUT I DIDN'T WANT TO BELIEVE IT.
*reads on*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! YOOOCHUN!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CHANGMIN'S INVOLVED. I KNOW IT. DAMN YOU CHANGMIN.
Yoochun's shot and Junsu's dead. This just depressed the shit out of me.

MY BABY HAS BEEN WORKING AS A TERRORIST FOR FOUR EFFING YEARS?!?!?
I still cru at how sad he is though. Must not...feel sadness.
And he just went a little crazy there...o.o

NO. I KNEW IT WASN'T YOOCHUN WHEN HE DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING AND SHE COULDN'T SEE HIS FACE. I KNEW IT. OH GOD. OH GOD. OH GOD.
That scared me! Don't do that! o.o

Eeeee! I just love Hyechun moments! He's so sweet and I love his dog! Yes, his dog. Hyun helps complete him. xD

NO. Nonononnononononononononononono. No. No. No.
CHANGMIN CANNOT LOVE HYE AGAIN. HE LOST HIS CHANCE. TIME TO MOVE ON. DATE A HOT WAITRESS LIKE JIN AE ALWAYS TOLD HIM TO DO. Wait, wrong story...

Okay, I thought Yoochun was going to die TWICE IN THIS CHAPTER. HOLY CROW.
NOW HYE'S GOING TO DIE. NO. NO NO.
DAMMIT. I THOUGHT SHE WOULD SEE HIS FACE.

askjdf;sadkljfsdklsadfjsad;lfasdfknadxfjsa'jofpuqweu0r9wasdfklasdfjsad;lfjasdfjapiusdfjk;lasdfj;dafj!!!!
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I ALWAYS WONDERED IF JUNSU WAS INVOLVED. I ALWAYS WONDERED HORRIBLY. I KNOW SOMEWHERE IN MY COMMENTS I SAID JUNSU WAS INVOLVED. *scrolls down* we'll worry about that later.
Is the other one Jaejoong then? Wait...no. That doesn't make sense. UNLESS YOU'RE TOTALLY FUCKING WITH MY BRAIN NOW. I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. WHY WOULD MY HEALTHY NUT HUSBAND DO THIS? He's going to get a talking to.

She's wearing Yoochun's shirt. Sexy.

Ooooo. She didn't tell Changmin she loved him. Good girl.
They're cute little embrace and talking and asdkjfa;sdjf FEELS. LOTS OF FEELS.

They're just so cute, I can't stand it! Like, omg. And I like how Hye's a little happier than usual with him around and just lots of feels and jealousy. I want a man to feed me breakfast.

YES. FINALLY. HYECHUN FOR THE WIN!!!!

Seriously, I was just reading it like "that's right, Yoochun! Let her have it! Oh, wait...Oh, yay. "

Honestly, I wanted to slap them both at the beginning, because Yoochun said something stupid and Hye was being to stubborn. But they made up for it in the end! But I love how Yoochun came to save her, it makes me flail more.

This made my shitty day better. Thank you for writing brilliance.

I feel so bad for Yunho. I just want to hug and cuddle him.
The rest of it was so intense. I WANT TO KNOW WHO THE MASKED FIENDS ARE. SERIOUSLY. The one is so cruel and evil and abrasive and I want to punch him in the face!!

Damn. The whole thing with Jaejoong and Junsu was intense and then the raw emotion you had with Yoochun and Hye. Wow. And they kissed! Finally!!!!

Changmin, you jerk. You should have stayed with her! Why didn't you stay with her!?!?!

Junsu cracks me up.
And Yoochun is such a sweetheart, gah! Yep, Yoochun's definitely the sweetest thing ever. Like, he gives me serious feels, I can't.

The title to this chapter scares me. o.o
Scared....I'm scared...freaking out because I see this all in my head as she's walking down the hall. o.o

NNOOOOOO. NOT CHAE MU.

I'm like all depressed and sad now for Yunho. Like, seriously. Really sad. Really, really sad.

I have to ask. Is the murderer another K-Pop dude or someone random? Tell me!!!!

And what's up with Yunho?? o.o I must know! Tell me!

For some reason this last part didn't through on the last comment so I had to demand it!!!

"I didn't even start taking off my clothes. I don't know what you're talking about." I love it!

That was absolutely adorable what they did, passing notes with binoculars. Priceless!

WHO IS THE FIRST CULPRIT? WHAT?
Gosh, I love how deep and intricate you make this. How you plan everything out and its all so legit. I am jealous. Really.
Changmin's a douche and I'm more and more in love with Yoochun. He's so good for Hye and he totally puts Changmin and Yunni in their places. Like a boss.
Wonderful update; I'm loving how this is heating up.