Wicked - Comments

Ok, when I saw that JYJ and TVXQ were going to make appearances in this story, I flipped out. Also, the summary is really good too and it sucked me in. I only had time to read the first chapter, but I have to say that it was awesome. I'm so intrigued and I want to read more. I want to know why there were shooting at them and what is going on. Why is it that Hye can't trust anyone? Ahh! I must know! Ok, later I am coming back to finish this because it is seriously really good.

I love the detail you give after the dialogue and how you deliver it. The chapter just had a really nice flow. I do have a knit-pick, though. I noticed that the next sentence after dialogue isn't always capitalized. I wouldn't have commented on it but it was repetitive and it just caught my eye for some reason.

I didn't spot anything else other than that. I know I've said it a million times but that first chapter was just really good.

Changmin. I hate you. You're such a douche. I wanted to cry at their fight. Just.

Still shipping YooHye. Hyechun.
Omg, I can just picture them walking down the street, talking, and I find that so sweet and that's my type of romance thingy and gah. Dying. Idek why, but its so cute. /flail
They are so perfect! Give me therapist Yoochun! I need a man like him!

I am in love with Junsu, okay?
He's so quirky and odd. Adorable!
That's kinda freaky that they've been following her for that long. o.O Like, really freaky.

Poor Hye.
That's terrible how they're treating her. They need to calm the fuck down instead of yelling at her!! Excuse my language.

I ship YooHye in this chapter. Screw Changmin, he's a douche.

"I'm assuming that you've had intercourse with Changmin then?" I don't even know effing why I laughed at this, but I did.

I am loving Dr. Psychiatrist Yoochun. Like, seriously. I can see his speculating gaze and the way his eyes narrow when he's thinking...

OH MY GOSH. CHANGMIN. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? THAT'S TERRIBLE! HOW? WHY? YOU'RE A MEAN, CRUEL BASTARD SHIM CHANGMIN. A CRUEL ONE.

But at least Yoochun was there! YOOHYE FTW!!!

I don't like the ending. Not at all. SOMEONE SAVE YOOHYE!!

Poor Hye.
That's terrible how they're treating her. They need to calm the fuck down instead of yelling at her!! Excuse my language.

I ship YooHye in this chapter. Screw Changmin, he's a douche.

"I'm assuming that you've had intercourse with Changmin then?" I don't even know effing why I laughed at this, but I did.

I am loving Dr. Psychiatrist Yoochun. Like, seriously. I can see his speculating gaze and the way his eyes narrow when he's thinking...

OH MY GOSH. CHANGMIN. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? THAT'S TERRIBLE! HOW? WHY? YOU'RE A MEAN, CRUEL BASTARD SHIM CHANGMIN. A CRUEL ONE.

But at least Yoochun was there! YOOHYE FTW!!!

I don't like the ending. Not at all. SOMEONE SAVE YOOHYE!!

JUNSU. EEEEEEEEEP.
Pink nail polish, what? o.O

"let's cut the bullshit, shall we?" That's what Junsu said earlier. o.o o.o o.o...........Hmm....Either you didn't mean it that way or you did.

Oh, sweet Jesus! Her mother. That's terrible because she's a bitch, but still. Oh my God. Junsu's a freaking psychopath! OMG!

Ooooh! This is going to be intense!! Don't do it, Hye! Don't do it! They're going to kiiiiiiilllll you!

The speech that Hye gave Yunho's fiancé was definitely needed; she showed where she stood. I loved it! Can't wait for more!

Jaejoong plays the douche bag evil person rather nicely. I was very much pissed at the new president and him. Like, how can they even do that? That's not fair! Grrr! But seriously, Jaejoong gives me the willies and I think he's one of those that assassinated the president and was speaking in the previous chapter! Because he seems like a raging psychopath!

Much more ecstatic being who I have trusted... Junsu popped into my head during that one, but its probably not. I think of him as "ecstatic". xD

OMG. WHO ARE THE THREE? JAEJOONG? JUNSU? SOMEONE ELSE? OMG.

But the conversation between Hye and Yoochun was very heart-wrenching. Very sad. :c I feel so bad for Hye, she's falling apart slowly.

She's Yunho's sister and Changmin's fiancé...EEEP.
I like the boys; they're so caring, especially Changmin. Makes me all "awww! "
The last paragraph has me wondering what's going to happen!! Hye doesn't seem like the monster type so I'm very interested.
Wonderful update! I'm loving this!

Herg.
Action packed and intense right from the start! Poor Hye. :( But it was so intense! Omg~

And I can't believe I left that comment. v

Excuse me while I orgasm from this delicous porn.

That wasn't inappropriate or creepy in the slightest.